Sweet_Basil Posted March 21, 2015 Share Posted March 21, 2015 I like her and props for the flower on her shoulder. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted March 21, 2015 Author Share Posted March 21, 2015 (edited) Thanks :) I changed her hair color. I never am satisfied with hair color. Edited March 21, 2015 by Sawslothducksaucestrawman Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew Posted March 21, 2015 Share Posted March 21, 2015 Second hair color is really nice there imo, I like this lady, glad to see you posting! If you're up to edit her a bit, I've got some crit =w= I think the head felt a little shrunken on top so I pushed the top of the head NE a bit. I like this gal but her face kind of lacks expression to me. I think it's mainly in the huge void-ish eyes and that she's kind of staring into nothing. The shoulders also feel a bit too high to me, it makes her whole body look kinda smushed. There's also a lot of dark color in the otufit even though it's a light outfit, might want to be careful with that ^^ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted March 21, 2015 Author Share Posted March 21, 2015 Edited on right. Did the top of the head stuff and took a pixel height off the shoulders. Flower stayed where it was though, should I move that down as well? Not sure what to do about the eyes. I changed a pixel or two in the mouth to try and make it look unhappier. It might just look bad now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ErrantDShepherd Posted March 22, 2015 Share Posted March 22, 2015 I think some slightly diff mouth shading would look better... But its actually a very nice splice. Impressive seeing how far your skills have come from way back. :) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lt.Smirks Posted March 22, 2015 Share Posted March 22, 2015 Wow, looks nice! Errant's right though, the mouth shading is a little off and I think the right opv eyebrow needs a bit more anit-aliasing. I gotta say, I love your older stuff and I hope you stick around: I always like to see the old spriters coming back. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted March 22, 2015 Author Share Posted March 22, 2015 (edited) Thanks y'all. I'm sure I was better three years ago than I am now, though. Its crazy that its been this long. I cant believe you called me old! I softened up the closer brow and gave her a more normal looking mouth. But that doesn't help with her expressionlessness haha. Edited March 22, 2015 by Sawslothducksaucestrawman Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fengaridotdll Posted April 2, 2015 Share Posted April 2, 2015 Would using the evil bodyguard guy from the first page be allowed for a hack? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted April 2, 2015 Author Share Posted April 2, 2015 Would using the evil bodyguard guy from the first page be allowed for a hack? Of course! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted April 19, 2015 Author Share Posted April 19, 2015 New comp entry. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strawman Posted March 27, 2016 Author Share Posted March 27, 2016 Its only been a year :/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted March 27, 2016 Share Posted March 27, 2016 wow! That's a pretty cool sprite. welcome back Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dollar Posted March 27, 2016 Share Posted March 27, 2016 Oh man, rad spritework. No offense to, well, anyone (including myself) but I've always thought people don't make enough really unique-looking mugs. Glad I signed up in time for your return, however long you'll be sticking around. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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