fuzz94 Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 (edited) Yeah so I have lots of shit here. Most of these were made with Dimensional Rift in mind, so there are hardly any OCs [spoiler=Awful, but everyone starts somewhere.] Isaac, Golden Sun Crono, Chrono Trigger Riku, Kingdom Hearts Zero, Megaman X. Used as a joke for my mug in MoH [spoiler=Still Awful, but a bit better] Zappa, Chrono Cross Jenna, Golden Sun [spoiler=Improved, but still bad.] Link, the Legend of Zelda Laura, FE10 Gatrie, FE9-10 Marle, Chrono Trigger Sheik. The Legend of Zelda, Ocarina of Time. [spoiler=The Bridge from Awful to okay.] Glenn, Chrono Cross... failure Isaac, Lost Magic...If anyone knows that game. A personal mug, it needs a revamp. [spoiler=Isaac Battle Sprite'] [spoiler=These ended up in DR, team worked by me and Subieko.] Isaac Revamp. Zappa Revamp. Gatrie Revamp. Riku Revamp. Glenn Revamp. [spoiler=Some other stuff made in that time period] Personal Mug for Arngrim the Berserker. He helped a bit. Princess Zelda. Twilight Princess version. A boss for DR and a Splice comp at FEShrine [spoiler=History of the Splice Competition] [spoiler=Project 76 sprites] Dax Orlan Olena [spoiler=Some of My Favorites] Edited December 10, 2012 by fuzz94 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darros Posted January 24, 2012 Share Posted January 24, 2012 Put tags around your links so we can see them right on the board. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted January 24, 2012 Share Posted January 24, 2012 Put tags around your links so we can see them right on the board. It'll say "Forums" right next to the right one on image shack. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted January 24, 2012 Author Share Posted January 24, 2012 Got it, edited the original post. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eclipse Posted January 24, 2012 Share Posted January 24, 2012 I'm guessing Zero's a custom. The shading on mostly everything is insufficient (as the sprite itself looks really flat), the eyes look really off, and the shoulders don't match. From what I see of the rest of your works (which someone besides me should critique, as all I see are glaring errors), I think you should get your splicing down-pat first. Go ahead and enter a splicing competition or five; you'll learn a lot! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted January 30, 2012 Author Share Posted January 30, 2012 Updates! Some shading to Zero. The eyes are still not looking good though. Fixed Riku's neck, the chest part is still evading me. And a splice competition entry, i did not win obviously. It was supposed to look like an old link. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted February 3, 2012 Author Share Posted February 3, 2012 I Really need some critique for these sprites because I want to get better at this. Zappa from Chrono Cross. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 I Really need some critique for these sprites because I want to get better at this. Zappa from Chrono Cross. Alright! Chrono Cross! I did a Karsh sprite ages ago. I do need to tinker with it cuz it has a lot of color problems but alas...i are lazy. PM me if you wanna see it. (i also did a Kid not too long ago.) Anyway. Overall it looks a lot better than what you have been doing. Red: Not sure what yer going for here. Looks kinda odd. Im guessing scars? I dont remember Zappa having bite marks in his neck. (this could be all me though.) Orange: Some shading issues or lack thereof. Yellow: Whats going here? His neck looks like he twisted it around and back again. But yeah, pretty good improvement so far. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted February 3, 2012 Author Share Posted February 3, 2012 Thank you! So the parts where you said, "What are you doing here?" was me being to lazy to erase the neck pattern and scars from Brendan Reed. Anyway, This is what I did to fix it/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 I think he needs collarbones or something... He looks like he has boobs O.o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanami Touko Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 And his body is sort of a circle. If you're trying to make a manly, broad shouldered man, he should have broad shoulders. Now, he just looks like one of those russian dolls, the ones that have smaller ones inside of them. I'm expecting a better sprite to pop out of him after opening him up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 I'd use more of the brightest skin tone, and have it follow his bady(not some blob). I'm gonna go against your fixes on florina's yellow and say you keep brendan's collarbone. He does seem to have a bit too much cleave, guys, even those with huge pecks, do not usually have them squished togethe like that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted February 3, 2012 Author Share Posted February 3, 2012 @everyone Like this for the collar bone and boobs chest? @seph Im not to sure how to fix the shoulders because the straps fit them perfectly and anything i try to do to them will end in failure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted February 3, 2012 Share Posted February 3, 2012 don't think pecs curl back like, that, I wouldn't put them at an angle farther than going up. like || / \ instead of \ / / \ if that makes sense. Also, you might have to extend the collar bone since it was covered by a shirt before. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted February 3, 2012 Author Share Posted February 3, 2012 Like this for the pecks? It looks most natural. And the collar bone still looks weird, not sure what to do about that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted February 4, 2012 Share Posted February 4, 2012 no he still has cleave. His collar bone looks better now though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted February 4, 2012 Author Share Posted February 4, 2012 Now? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted February 4, 2012 Share Posted February 4, 2012 try getting rid of those lines completely (maybe add some lighter skin tone to his chest too, chests for men are generally flat so there won't be as many shadows on them. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted February 4, 2012 Author Share Posted February 4, 2012 Alright. Now I might have it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted February 8, 2012 Author Share Posted February 8, 2012 (edited) Some more Stuff: Latest version of Zappa Jenna to go with Isaac. And I ripped the Riku sprites from Kingdom Hearts Chain of Memories. The style kinda works with FE. Edited February 8, 2012 by fuzz94 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted February 8, 2012 Share Posted February 8, 2012 Where do you get your colors? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted February 8, 2012 Author Share Posted February 8, 2012 I just recolor them my self. But I'm now realizing that I should be getting colors from other mugs. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted February 9, 2012 Share Posted February 9, 2012 I just recolor them my self. But I'm now realizing that I should be getting colors from other mugs. Yes, yes you should. Looks like you're going for FE6/7 colors. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted February 9, 2012 Author Share Posted February 9, 2012 I've been making these for an FE8 hack and recoloring them is on my to do list. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Feaw Posted February 9, 2012 Share Posted February 9, 2012 Yes, yes you should. Looks like you're going for FE6/7 colors. I do hope you mean that, at this point, it's wise for him to use IS colors, and not forever. Since, if you're good at picking colors yourself, it's better to use your own since lol IS colors. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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