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Lyn a.k.a. Lyndis was born in the Sacaean Plains to Madelyn of Caelin, only daughter of the Lycian Hausen, and Hassar, son of the chieftain Lorca tribe of Sacae. They first fell deeply in love with each other despite their backgrounds. Hausen was enraged, and thus did not approve with this relationship. He planned to engage Madelyn to the young marquess of Araphen. Madelyn refuse to marry Araphen marquess and escaped with Hassar to Sacae where they can begin their life there.

Hausen disowned Madelyn and remained silent these past years. He had resigned himself to the thought that Madelyn was dead in his eyes. Yet when he received a letter from her, it stated that she was living happily in Sacae with Hassar, and her new born daughter Lyndis, he then was overjoyed. Hoping to forgive Madelyn and Hassar, Hausen sent Wallace, Kent and Sain to retrieve Madelyn and Lyndis hoping to see them once again.

Few day's later, the Lorca tribe was invaded by bandits. The bandits poisoned their drinking water to weaken them as the Lorca were dying slowly and painfully which gives the opportunity for bandits to attack. The poison, combined with the assault of the bandits were too much for the Lorca. After Madelyn was the first to perished, Hassar used the last of his strength to allow the infant Lyn to escape on his horse where she was taken in by another tribe. She returned to her birthplace to find out she was the only survivor in her tribe.

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Hope you don't mind me "peer editting"? I'll bold places where I changed it. And I'll just cross off the things that ruin the grammatical format.

Lyn, also known as Lyndis, was born in the Sacaean Plains to Madelyn of Caelin, only daughter of the Lycian Hausen, and Hassar, son of the Lorca chieftain. Her parents first fell deeply in love with each other despite their backgrounds. Hausen was enraged, and thus did not approve of this relationship. He planned to engage Madelyn to the young marquess of Araphen. Madelyn refused to marry the marquess of Araphen and escaped with Hassar to Sacae where they began their new lives.

After Madelyn ran off with her lover, Hausen disowned her and didn't question how she was doing. He had resigned himself to the thought that Madelyn was dead in his eyes. Yet, when he received a letter from her, which stated that she was living happily in Sacae with Hassar and her new born daughter Lyndis, he then was overjoyed. Hoping to forgive Madelyn and Hassar, Hausen sent Wallace, Kent, and Sain to retrieve Madelyn and Lyndis in hopes of seeing them once again.

Eeep, I don't think Lyn was newborn when Kent, Sain, and Wallace were sent. Otherwise Kent and Sain would be around 5-6 year-old knights. o-O Are you sure this information is accurate, or is it just something added to make it flow better?

A few days later, the Lorca tribe was invaded by bandits. The bandits poisoned their drinking water to weaken them. As the poison caused many of the Lorca to die or become extremely sick, the bandits were given an opportunity to attack. The poison, combined with the assault of the bandits, was too much for the Lorca to handle. After Madelyn was slain, Hassar forced Lyn to escape on his horse. Lyn ended up being taken in by another tribe. She returned to her birthplace to find out she was the only survivor of her tribe.

I tried fixing a bunch of grammar mistakes and some things were inaccurate with the story. I believe Lyn wasn't an infant when she saw her mother and father for the last time, was she?

Also, just a few things I'd like to note:

-This seems more like a summary of her history, and it doesn't exactly describe her involvement in any of the story events that occurred during the game.

-More descriptions about her character personality?

-A line about her physical appearance and how Hausen stated that she resembles her mother might help.

Edited by Eltoshen
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Plus, in the game, she says it herself that the Lorcan-Sacaean survivors were around ten, including herself. So there has to be at least nine more members of her tribe still alive.

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It is spelled "chieftain" for the record. Lyn was actually fairly old (in her teens, I believe) when her village was attacked.

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