Tangerine Posted February 29, 2012 Share Posted February 29, 2012 (edited) It seems kind of empty and incomplete to be honest. Chapter 1 I mean. Don't have the time to watch chapter 2. Also "Close Bow" is an awful name. Just use Short Bow, they're meant for close range use anyway and are an actual bow :P. Edited February 29, 2012 by Tangerine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HF Makalov Fanboy Kai Posted February 29, 2012 Share Posted February 29, 2012 so if the soldiers suck, just replace with with something like more knights, or calaviers. i'm not a fan of useless units, no matter what side they are on in TU, the weak generics in this one stage are used to make sure that the entire enemy army doesn't rush you all at once on the first turn. for chapter 2 those two soldiers don't even slow down the enemies for a turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted February 29, 2012 Author Share Posted February 29, 2012 (edited) @ Makalov: Yea I can replace them with two knights instead of the soldiers. @ Tangerine: I just wanted to change the name of it but I guess your right I could just use the original name lol Also how is chapter one incomplete? You're the first one to tell me that so I would like to know. Edited February 29, 2012 by NYZgamer3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted April 21, 2012 Author Share Posted April 21, 2012 (edited) Hey everyone, I did some major changes to my hack since I was not satisfied with the old ones. I got new portraits, new characters, new maps and little change to the story. Here are the updated prologue. Prologue: PS. For some reason my videos are slow at some points. I don't know why but I think when I was rendering the video it made some points slow for all the videos. Edited April 21, 2012 by NYZgamer3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted April 21, 2012 Author Share Posted April 21, 2012 Chapter 1: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted April 21, 2012 Author Share Posted April 21, 2012 Chapter 2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted April 21, 2012 Author Share Posted April 21, 2012 Here is my chapter 3. Check it out and let me know what you think. Thanks guys! :) Sorry for the multiple posts. It won't let me add more than one media for each post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted April 21, 2012 Share Posted April 21, 2012 Yaaaaaaaaay I was so very hopeful that this project wasn't dead <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted April 21, 2012 Author Share Posted April 21, 2012 Yaaaaaaaaay I was so very hopeful that this project wasn't dead <3 Haha nope, it's not dead and won't be. It just took a while for me to make some changes. Lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted April 21, 2012 Share Posted April 21, 2012 Well that's okay, fixes are important :3 Good to see it's still troopin'~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted April 21, 2012 Share Posted April 21, 2012 Wow! The mugs look way better! Everything has improved you put alot of time into this. I like those new weapon icons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted April 21, 2012 Author Share Posted April 21, 2012 Wow! The mugs look way better! Everything has improved you put alot of time into this. I like those new weapon icons. Thanks Fuzz! I appreciate it! :) Very true Jubby. Thank you! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted April 21, 2012 Share Posted April 21, 2012 Guntram's animation made me say "Yowza!" It looks so sick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted April 21, 2012 Author Share Posted April 21, 2012 Guntram's animation made me say "Yowza!" It looks so sick Haha thank you! My little brother made it. He's mad good with animations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThatGuyDownTheStreet Posted April 21, 2012 Share Posted April 21, 2012 Wow, I must say this is a very good hack, even better than what it was before. Though the portraits could use a little work, but they aren't terrible currently. Can't wait to see more of it in the future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted April 21, 2012 Author Share Posted April 21, 2012 Wow, I must say this is a very good hack, even better than what it was before. Though the portraits could use a little work, but they aren't terrible currently. Can't wait to see more of it in the future. Thanks ThatGuy! Appreciate it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted April 30, 2012 Author Share Posted April 30, 2012 (edited) Chapter 4 is done and out! Check it out and you know the rest. Subscribe me on youtube please. It will be much appreciated! :) Thanks guys! Chapter 4: A Cry for Help. Edited April 30, 2012 by NYZgamer3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 I really have liked this hack for a while now, and I like the emphasis you put on dialogue and story. It's rare to see someone care that much about making their characters more than just plot points, but actual beings that have personalities and exist. I recommend you learn how to best format text though, as all the story in the world won't help if the text is aggravating to read and unprofessional. Let me give you an example of badly formatted text and how I would fix it. [OpenLeft][LoadFace][0x01][0x0A]Hi guys my name is test text and I'm here to teach you about[A] proper formatting today.[A] Right off the bat we started with triple lined text that could easily be condensed[A] into two lines.[A] That's no good.[A] Also the lines aren't aligned together properly leading to something like this jumbled mess.[A] Then as you can see there's one LONG line that extends the textbox waythefuck out there. believe me this isn't good.[A] Oops did you spot the text skip?[A] of corse this is laking in mispellings and etc but you[A] should get my point.[A][X] The above... that's an abomination. I would go through and clean it up, like so: [OpenLeft][LoadFace][0x01][0x0A] Hi guys my name is test text and I'm here to teach you about proper formatting today.[A] I redid this sentence because it was too long for the textbox and crammed it into two lines.[A] That's the way it ought to be, you see.[A] Also, the lines are now aligned together properly fixing up the old jumbled mess.[A] Condensing three lines into two is again a good idea, so always make sure to do that.[A] All the lines now are the same length and don't mess up the flow of the textbox.[A] Short sentences, then long sentences, and rinse and repeat should be avoided when possible.[A][X] I uh, hope that cleared some things up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted April 30, 2012 Author Share Posted April 30, 2012 I really have liked this hack for a while now, and I like the emphasis you put on dialogue and story. It's rare to see someone care that much about making their characters more than just plot points, but actual beings that have personalities and exist. I recommend you learn how to best format text though, as all the story in the world won't help if the text is aggravating to read and unprofessional. Let me give you an example of badly formatted text and how I would fix it. [OpenLeft][LoadFace][0x01][0x0A]Hi guys my name is test text and I'm here to teach you about[A] proper formatting today.[A] Right off the bat we started with triple lined text that could easily be condensed[A] into two lines.[A] That's no good.[A] Also the lines aren't aligned together properly leading to something like this jumbled mess.[A] Then as you can see there's one LONG line that extends the textbox waythefuck out there. believe me this isn't good.[A] Oops did you spot the text skip?[A] of corse this is laking in mispellings and etc but you[A] should get my point.[A][X] The above... that's an abomination. I would go through and clean it up, like so: [OpenLeft][LoadFace][0x01][0x0A] Hi guys my name is test text and I'm here to teach you about proper formatting today.[A] I redid this sentence because it was too long for the textbox and crammed it into two lines.[A] That's the way it ought to be, you see.[A] Also, the lines are now aligned together properly fixing up the old jumbled mess.[A] Condensing three lines into two is again a good idea, so always make sure to do that.[A] All the lines now are the same length and don't mess up the flow of the textbox.[A] Short sentences, then long sentences, and rinse and repeat should be avoided when possible.[A][X] I uh, hope that cleared some things up. Thanks for the tip Adolf. I'll deff keep that in mind. I'll clean it up and make sure that it will be better for the upcoming chapters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted April 30, 2012 Share Posted April 30, 2012 (edited) yay! this hack is awesome Um. I feel like the units start way to clumped together, but that's just me. When he says, "Scums", I feel like he should say "Scum" When he says, "You don't owe me nothing," I feel he should use proper grammar because that is how he normally talks and is a knight. Edited April 30, 2012 by fuzz94 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted April 30, 2012 Author Share Posted April 30, 2012 yay! this hack is awesome Um. I feel like the units start way to clumped together, but that's just me. When he says, "Scums", I feel like he should say "Scum" When he says, "You don't owe me nothing," I feel he should use proper grammar because that is how he normally talks and is a knight. Thanks Fuzz and alright, I got you. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheHeroGaol Posted May 1, 2012 Share Posted May 1, 2012 I really have liked this hack for a while now, and I like the emphasis you put on dialogue and story. It's rare to see someone care that much about making their characters more than just plot points, but actual beings that have personalities and exist. This. I really like the direction this hack is taking, and i can definitely see myself getting hooked when it's playable. You have something very promising going here NYZ, don't stop! Oh, and if you need any help with anything, I would be more than willing to contribute graphics or whatever else you need. Just PM me if you're interested, i'm a ROMhacker too, so i know what it's like going alone on a project like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted May 1, 2012 Author Share Posted May 1, 2012 This. I really like the direction this hack is taking, and i can definitely see myself getting hooked when it's playable. You have something very promising going here NYZ, don't stop! Oh, and if you need any help with anything, I would be more than willing to contribute graphics or whatever else you need. Just PM me if you're interested, i'm a ROMhacker too, so i know what it's like going alone on a project like this. Thanks Hero! I appreciate it a lot! :) I will deff keep that in mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted May 1, 2012 Share Posted May 1, 2012 Yeah, I like it for the characters, too, and it just seems like a lot of fun to play :3 If you decide you want any custom graphics and stuff, let me know and I can either teach you how to insert them or do a few for you :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NYZgamer3 Posted May 1, 2012 Author Share Posted May 1, 2012 Yeah, I like it for the characters, too, and it just seems like a lot of fun to play :3 If you decide you want any custom graphics and stuff, let me know and I can either teach you how to insert them or do a few for you :P Thanks Jubby! I'll PM you and see take it from there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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