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I may not get it all done tonight, but I'll finish it:

Titania

Summary:

Titania is the Deputy Commander of the Greil Mercenaries. She considers herself a caregiver to Ike and Mist.

Bio:

Pre-PoR:

Much of Titania's life remains in question. She was formally a soldier in the Crimean Army. During her military career, she was involved in an officer exchange program, and was subsequently sent to the laguz country of Gallia, an ally of her homeland. It was here that the rider first met the man she would later serve under, Greil. During a training match in Gallia's royal hall, Titania was awed by Greil's swordsmanship and combat ability recalling that he fought, with great success, wave after wave of knights. The battle scene left Titania asking the swordsman to train her which he agreed to do. At every possible hour, the red-headed knight would meet Greil to learn more in the ways of combat. After a few weeks, Greil invited Titania home with him, and it was there that she first met his infant son, Ike. She saw a different side of her idol that day; a side she quite possibly developed feelings for. At some point after this invitation, Titania returned to Crimea. It is not known how long she remained a knight in the army's service, but it was likely several years before the Mad King's War began. Titania later resgined her commission for unknown reasons. Her choice would one day bring her into contact with Greil again, though the famed swordsman was by now a widower and a mercenary. It was this mercenary life Titania would adopt herself, and she eventually became the second-in-command of the Greil Mercenaries.

PoR:

The years rolled by. Ike and his younger sister Mist grew with Titania watching over them. She cared for Mist a great deal, and the two grew to be very close. Titania, along with the rest of the company, aided in driving bandits from local villages. Her mercenary life was soon to take an interesting turn. War soon came to Crimea as Daein, the country's westward neighbor, attacked swiftly and suddenly. Though no longer in the country's service, Titania was one of the members of her company who opted to aid Crimea in this troubled time. As such, along with several other troop members, the paladin was sent to investiage the road which led to Melior, Crimea's captial, where, after a brief skirmish with the Daein army, they discovered a young woman lying motionless nearby. The mercenaries returned to their base of operations with Elincia, the woman they found, whom they later learned was none other than the Princess of Crimea herself. Alone, Titania pondered over the smilarties between the princess and the king and queen. When the Daein troops laid seige to the mercenary fort, Titania helped defend her company though they were still forced to flee the fort and Crimea as well. The long journey first took them to Gallia. It was in this forest-littered country that Titania experienced what may have been her greatest personal tragedy. In a duel with a former-pupil, Commander Greil was killed. Though she was deeply saddened by the death of the man she likely loved, Titania continued to lend her lance and fighting abilities to the Greil Mercenaries, now led by Ike, and later the Crimean Liberation Army, as the journey took her to Begnion, Daein, and finally back to Crimea itself where the final battles of the war took place. After the war ended, Titania returned to her old life along with her fellow mercenaries.

RD:

Titania, like the rest of the Greil Mercenaries, was not seen until the very end of the Crimean Revolution. Tailing the rebel army in secret, Titania and the company launched a surprise attack following the battle at Fort Alpea and successfully halting the execution of Crimea's Lady Lucia. With the end of the rebellion, the group egarly returned to their fort only to be called into battle once again. With the mercenaries hired to aid the recently-formed Laguz Alliance in their war, Titania rode into battle against the very country that provided them aid in the Mad King's War: the Begnion Empire. The war took her through Daein, Begnion, and to Crimea's border with Gallia, eventually leading on a mission back into Daein to aid Empress Sanaki who had been removed from power by the Begnion Senate. With the awakening of the goddess Ashera and judgement striking all of Tellius, Titania rode with a group led by Ike towards the Begnion captial of Sienne. After Ashera's defeat, Titania remained with the Greil Mercenaries as their Deputy Commander. Once every year, she would visit the graves of all her fallen allies including that of her former commander.

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Much of Titania's life remains in question. She was formally a soldier in the Crimean Army.

Maybe you could comment that the second sentence was something that is, however, certain about her life.

Titania was awed by Greil's swordsmanship and combat ability(,) recalling that he fought wave after wave of knights (with great success).
It was this mercenary life Titania (that) would adopt herself,

Just to make it a bit clearer.

The years rolled by.

You should probably mention since when (or what) did the years roll back. Perhaps something like "Living as a mercenary, the years rolled by."

Ike and his younger sister Mist grew (up) with Titania watching over them.
Titania, along with the rest of the company, aided in driving bandits from local villages. Her mercenary life was soon to take an interesting turn. War soon came to Crimea as Daein, the country's westward neighbor, attacked swiftly and suddenly.

I think these three sentences could be altered to better compliment one another. One way that I can think of- For the first sentence, you could mention how that's what she usually did as a mercenary. While, for the third, you could remove the "soon", since you already mentioned "soon" in the second sentence. There's probably other ways though.

Though she was deeply saddened by the death of the man she likely loved, Titania continued to lend her lance and fighting abilities to the Greil Mercenaries, now led by Ike, and later the Crimean Liberation Army, as the journey took her to Begnion, Daein, and finally back to Crimea itself where the final battles of the war took place. After the war ended, Titania returned to her old life along with her fellow mercenaries.

I'm not sure if you're already planning, but you could add some things about Titania wanting to know about what happened to Greil on that fateful day, as well as what happened after she knew. Also, I can't remember if any of her supports or base convos mention anything important.

Tailing the rebel army in secret, Titania and the company launched a surprise attack(,) following the battle at Fort Alpea(,) and successfully halting the execution of Crimea's Lady Lucia.
eventually leading on a mission back into Daein

Should that be "leading to"?

With the awakening of the goddess Ashera and judgement striking all of Tellius

I think it's safe to use "after" to begin the sentence. I just noticed how you've rarely used "after" in this article (not too sure about the others). It's one word that I think I use far too much, since I'm lazy to think of alternatives X D

Also, maybe you should add "and her" before judgement, or something (maybe "whose" would also work, I'm not sure).

Otherwise, I think it's looking good. Makes me want to start on a new article as well ^^;;;

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Titania

Ok, made the edits and added a few new ones. I would add those things about her wanting to know about what happened to Greil, and I looked for it, but that's a big script. I'll look again though to find out what happened after she knew for my next edit, which I'm sure I'll need to make. I really need to start playing PoR again; same with the rest of them so I can really help with your efforts.

My whole hobby is about finding alternatives to words. XD Guess it rubs off when you keep doing it.

Ok, what do you think of this?

Titania

Summary:

Titania is the Deputy Commander of the Greil Mercenaries. She considers herself a caregiver to Ike and Mist, believing looking out for them to be her duty.

Bio:

Pre-PoR:

Much of Titania's life remains in question. However, one thing is known about her life; she was formally a soldier in the Crimean Army. During her military career, she was involved in an officer exchange program, and was subsequently sent to the laguz country of Gallia, an ally of her homeland. It was here that the rider first met the man she would later serve under, Greil. During a training match in Gallia's royal hall, Titania was awed by Greil's swordsmanship and combat ability, recalling that he fought wave after wave of knights with great success. The battle scene left Titania asking the swordsman to train her which he agreed to do. At every possible hour, the red-headed knight would meet Greil to learn more in the ways of combat. After a few weeks, Greil invited Titania home with him, and it was there that she first met his infant son, Ike. She saw a different side of her idol that day; a side she quite possibly developed feelings for. At some point after this invitation, Titania returned to Crimea. It is not known how long she remained a knight in the army's service, but it was likely several years before the Mad King's War began. Titania later resgined her commission for unknown reasons. Her choice would one day bring her into contact with Greil again, though the famed swordsman was by now a widower and a mercenary. It was this mercenary life Titania that would adopt herself, and she eventually became the second-in-command of the Greil Mercenaries.

PoR:

Living as a mercenary, the years rolled by. Ike and his younger sister Mist grew up with Titania watching over them. She cared for Mist a great deal, and the two grew to be very close. Much of Titania's career as a member of the company was spent driving out bandits from nearby villages, although it was not prestigious work nor well-paying. Her mercenary life was soon to take an interesting turn; war came to Crimea as Daein, the country's westward neighbor, attacked swiftly and suddenly. Though no longer in the country's service, Titania was one of the members of her company who opted to aid Crimea in this troubled time. As such, along with several other troop members, the paladin was sent to investiage the road which led to Melior, Crimea's captial, where, after a brief skirmish with the Daein army, they discovered a young woman lying motionless nearby. The mercenaries returned to their base of operations with Elincia, the woman they found, whom they later learned was none other than the Princess of Crimea herself. Alone, Titania pondered over the smilarties between the princess and the king and queen. When the Daein troops laid seige to the mercenary fort, Titania helped defend her company though they were still forced to flee the fort and Crimea as well. The long journey first took them to Gallia. It was in this forest-littered country that Titania experienced what may have been her greatest personal tragedy. In a duel with the Black Knight, a former pupil of his, Commander Greil was killed. Though she was deeply saddened by the death of the man she likely loved, Titania continued to lend her lance and fighting abilities to the Greil Mercenaries, now led by Ike, and later the Crimean Liberation Army, as the journey took her to Begnion, Daein, and finally back to Crimea itself where the final battles of the war took place. Over the course of her travels, Titania hoped to learn more from Ike about his father's death. She also took time to tell Ike more about Greil also; how she'd met him and the first time he brought her to his home. After she'd told Ike more about his father, Ike suspected that Titania may have had feelings towards her fallen leader, though she said nothing when he questioned her about it. After the war ended, Titania returned to her old life along with her fellow mercenaries.

RD:

Titania, like the rest of the Greil Mercenaries, was not seen until the very end of the Crimean Revolution. Tailing the rebel army in secret, Titania and the company launched a surprise attack following the battle at Fort Alpea, and successfully halted the execution of Crimea's Lady Lucia. With the end of the rebellion, the group egarly returned to their fort only to be called into battle once again. With the mercenaries hired to aid the recently-formed Laguz Alliance in their war, Titania rode into battle against the very country that provided them aid in the Mad King's War: the Begnion Empire. The war took her through Daein, Begnion, and to Crimea's border with Gallia, eventually leading on a mission leading to Daein to aid Empress Sanaki who had been removed from power by the Begnion Senate. After the awakening of the goddess Ashera and her judgement striking all of Tellius, Titania rode with a group led by Ike towards the Begnion captial of Sienne. After Ashera's defeat, Titania remained with the Greil Mercenaries as their Deputy Commander. Once every year, she would visit the graves of all her fallen allies including that of her former commander.

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believing (that) looking out for them (is) her duty.

Edited for clarity. It did make sense before, but it was a bit ambiguous.

It was this mercenary life (that Titania) would adopt herself

Should be swapped around.

She also took time to tell Ike more about Greil also;

The second also should be omitted.

how she'd met him and the first time he brought her to his home. After she'd told Ike more about his father

Not sure if it's just me, but "she'd" sounds a bit odd. I'm fairly sure it's a proper term though. Maybe replace it with just "she" or "she had"

the group egarly returned to their fort

Eagerly is typo'd. You might want to check my spelling of it as well.

eventually leading on a mission leading to Daein to aid Empress Sanaki

Something seems wrong here. Maybe change it to "eventually leading to a mission, towards(?) Daein, to aid Empress Sanaki"

I think it looks great : )

I'll also try and help look for the important parts of the script, if you haven't already found them by then.

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Ok. Still looking for the script. I already used her support convos, so I guess I'll have to sift through the base ones.

Titania

Summary:

Titania is the Deputy Commander of the Greil Mercenaries. She considers herself a caregiver to Ike and Mist, believing that looking out for them is her duty.

Bio:

Pre-PoR:

Much of Titania's life remains in question. However, one thing is known about her life; she was formally a soldier in the Crimean Army. During her military career, she was involved in an officer exchange program, and was subsequently sent to the laguz country of Gallia, an ally of her homeland. It was here that the rider first met the man she would later serve under, Greil. During a training match in Gallia's royal hall, Titania was awed by Greil's swordsmanship and combat ability, recalling that he fought wave after wave of knights with great success. The battle scene left Titania asking the swordsman to train her which he agreed to do. At every possible hour, the red-headed knight would meet Greil to learn more in the ways of combat. After a few weeks, Greil invited Titania home with him, and it was there that she first met his infant son, Ike. She saw a different side of her idol that day; a side she quite possibly developed feelings for. At some point after this invitation, Titania returned to Crimea. It is not known how long she remained a knight in the army's service, but it was likely several years before the Mad King's War began. Titania later resgined her commission for unknown reasons. Her choice would one day bring her into contact with Greil again, though the famed swordsman was by now a widower and a mercenary. It was this mercenary life that Titania would adopt herself, and she eventually became the second-in-command of the Greil Mercenaries.

PoR:

Living as a mercenary, the years rolled by. Ike and his younger sister Mist grew up with Titania watching over them. She cared for Mist a great deal, and the two grew to be very close. Much of Titania's career as a member of the company was spent driving out bandits from nearby villages, although it was not prestigious work nor well-paying. Her mercenary life was soon to take an interesting turn; war came to Crimea as Daein, the country's westward neighbor, attacked swiftly and suddenly. Though no longer in the country's service, Titania was one of the members of her company who opted to aid Crimea in this troubled time. As such, along with several other troop members, the paladin was sent to investiage the road which led to Melior, Crimea's captial, where, after a brief skirmish with the Daein army, they discovered a young woman lying motionless nearby. The mercenaries returned to their base of operations with Elincia, the woman they found, whom they later learned was none other than the Princess of Crimea herself. Alone, Titania pondered over the smilarties between the princess and the king and queen. When the Daein troops laid seige to the mercenary fort, Titania helped defend her company though they were still forced to flee the fort and Crimea as well. The long journey first took them to Gallia. It was in this forest-littered country that Titania experienced what may have been her greatest personal tragedy. In a duel with the Black Knight, a former pupil of his, Commander Greil was killed. Though she was deeply saddened by the death of the man she likely loved, Titania continued to lend her lance and fighting abilities to the Greil Mercenaries, now led by Ike, and later the Crimean Liberation Army, as the journey took her to Begnion, Daein, and finally back to Crimea itself where the final battles of the war took place. Over the course of her travels, Titania hoped to learn more from Ike about his father's death. She also took time to tell Ike more about Greil; how she had met him and the first time he brought her to his home. After she'd told Ike more about his father, Ike suspected that Titania may have had feelings towards her fallen leader, though she said nothing when he questioned her about it. After the war ended, Titania returned to her old life along with her fellow mercenaries.

RD:

Titania, like the rest of the Greil Mercenaries, was not seen until the very end of the Crimean Revolution. Tailing the rebel army in secret, Titania and the company launched a surprise attack following the battle at Fort Alpea, and successfully halted the execution of Crimea's Lady Lucia. With the end of the rebellion, the group eagerly returned to their fort only to be called into battle once again. With the mercenaries hired to aid the recently-formed Laguz Alliance in their war, Titania rode into battle against the very country that provided them aid in the Mad King's War: the Begnion Empire. The war took her through Daein, Begnion, and to Crimea's border with Gallia, eventually leading on a mission leading through Daein and into Begnion to aid Empress Sanaki who had been removed from power by the Begnion Senate. After the awakening of the goddess Ashera and her judgement striking all of Tellius, Titania rode with a group led by Ike towards Sienne, the captial of Begnion. After Ashera's defeat, Titania remained with the Greil Mercenaries as their Deputy Commander. Once every year, she would visit the graves of all her fallen allies including that of her former commander.

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Tailing the rebel army in secret, Titania and the company launched a surprise attack following the battle at Fort Alpea and successfully halting the execution of Crimea's Lady Lucia.

You could mention that they were actually hired by Bastian to do this.

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I don't think it would hurt to add that, but it's probably better mentioned in a more general article, like the Part 2 synopsis (where I think it is mentioned).

In any case, I'll take a look at the recently revised version later.

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Besides, I'd have to find a different way to word it for every other article on the GM's since they all were involved.

And yeah it is mentioned there.

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I looked around in my archives and I finally found the English script dump.

I've uploaded them here, if you need them. Alternatively, I just noticed I uploaded them into a zip file almost half a year ago... The script was dumped by DarkTwilkitri by the way.

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Thanks. I'll go through them.

It'll take some time though. That's a lot of words to go through, and with school on for me, things are busy. But, I'll be looking.

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