Zaprong's struggle to draw correctly

[Zaprong]

Hello! This is my own galery!

This is actually I thing a focus on most of my time on, but I have very few pieces because I fail at being good at drawing faces and/or Cloth folds and they end up scrapped ;_;

I Accept requests, art trades, switcheroos, etc. the only thing I will refuse is being asked to draw something with sexual content and such lol

BTW, here is all of the FE art I have drawn up to this date:

Roy (3/17/2014):

This was actually a Miracle or something, I did almost everything right and I was proud of it c:

Lilina (23/3/2014):

This one wasn't so good, guess why :c

Nah (3/26/2014):

I love wordplay, ten points to the one who knows what is the wordplay lol

And here is my most recent art, even through it's not FE related:

Pierrot/Doppleganger Arle (Puyo Puyo~n) (5/25/2014):

So yeah, here is everything for now, critisism is appreciated! And tutorials too because if I draw a good face it must to be a miracle...

[Tessie Spoon]

Decent-quality art; keep up the good work! I like the Pierrot one the most. :) The faces aren't that bad imo.

As for criticism, Lilina's skirt doesn't seem to go over her right leg rightly, her right arm is rather short, and her clothing could use more folds. I'll do a redline of it and PM it to you later, to better show what I mean. Also, the back of her hait could use more stringly-stated shading, since there'd be less light hitting there. Same for some other spots, such as the right half of her clothing.

I'd suggest you look up tuts on clothing folds and shading; better rendering of clothing and shading would be what that picture could use the most.

Shading strength aside, I don't really see any problems with the other pics. Hope this helps!

[Zaprong]

yeah, I kinda suck at Cloth folds :(

And Yeah Lilina isn't very good, but her shading in her right part of her clothing is because of the Book (That is emmiting a lighter light lol)

Btw, i have Improoved in shading, Pierrot was made 2 months after the FE ones so I have inproved in there, but I can't draw faces.

In fact, 60% of the drawings I do get scrapped because I can't draw faces right. And tutorials really aren't helping with prespective that much, Cloth folds is another problem too.

But yeah I accept any kind of tutorial/criticism in here! I'm here to improve and make friends after all :)

[Zaprong]

Here I bring some of my old art to keep this more active.

ELeSA (4/6/2014)

Yes, it IS a pun, Sad Rotom freeze is the only Ice-Electric

Aikurou [Requested] (4/13/2014)

I love how I drew the milotic ;A;

This was also requested, a pun that I missed :(

Junpei (4/9/2014)

I couldn't have missed this one, /ever/

Hana [OC] (5/4/2014)

Yay for something actually creative for once. but even yet I suck at it :(

Also, I'm working on this

I'm horrible at faces and Cloth folds ;A;

someone, please, halp ;_;

[Zaprong]

I can't draw ;_;

Noah, the Genderbend of Nah.

I feel like I'm not making any progress....

[Tessie Spoon]

I rather like the poses, and that Milotic! If you're looking to get better at drawing people, maybe you can do some focused figure studies. You can ask around at conceptart.org and see if you're shown a good starting point :)

Personally, I work on basics (still life, perspective) and read from Andrew Loomis' figure drawing books, also sparing some time to draw people from photos. Maybe you'll find a method that fits you better; people learn best in different ways, after all. (neurochemistry!)