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It seems kind of empty and incomplete to be honest. Chapter 1 I mean. Don't have the time to watch chapter 2.

Also "Close Bow" is an awful name. Just use Short Bow, they're meant for close range use anyway and are an actual bow :P.

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so if the soldiers suck, just replace with with something like more knights, or calaviers.

i'm not a fan of useless units, no matter what side they are on

in TU, the weak generics in this one stage are used to make sure that the entire enemy army doesn't rush you all at once on the first turn.

for chapter 2 those two soldiers don't even slow down the enemies for a turn.

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@ Makalov: Yea I can replace them with two knights instead of the soldiers.

@ Tangerine: I just wanted to change the name of it but I guess your right I could just use the original name lol

Also how is chapter one incomplete? You're the first one to tell me that so I would like to know.

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Hey everyone, I did some major changes to my hack since I was not satisfied with the old ones. I got new portraits, new characters, new maps and little change to the story.

Here are the updated prologue.

Prologue:

PS. For some reason my videos are slow at some points. I don't know why but I think when I was rendering the video it made some points slow for all the videos.

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Wow, I must say this is a very good hack, even better than what it was before. Though the portraits could use a little work, but they aren't terrible currently. Can't wait to see more of it in the future.

Thanks ThatGuy! Appreciate it :)

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Chapter 4 is done and out!

Check it out and you know the rest.

Subscribe me on youtube please. It will be much appreciated! :)

Thanks guys!

Chapter 4: A Cry for Help.

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I really have liked this hack for a while now, and I like the emphasis you put on dialogue and story. It's rare to see someone care that much about making their characters more than just plot points, but actual beings that have personalities and exist. I recommend you learn how to best format text though, as all the story in the world won't help if the text is aggravating to read and unprofessional. Let me give you an example of badly formatted text and how I would fix it.

[OpenLeft][LoadFace][0x01][0x0A]Hi guys my name
is test text and I'm here to teach you about[A]
proper formatting today.[A]
Right off the bat we started with
triple lined text that could easily be condensed[A]
into two lines.[A] That's no good.[A]
Also the lines aren't aligned together properly leading to something like
this jumbled mess.[A]
Then as you can see there's one LONG line that
extends the textbox waythefuck out there.
believe me this isn't good.[A]
Oops did you spot the text skip?[A]
of corse this is laking in mispellings and etc but you[A]
should get my point.[A][X]

The above... that's an abomination. I would go through and clean it up, like so:

[OpenLeft][LoadFace][0x01][0x0A]
Hi guys my name is test text and I'm here to
teach you about proper formatting today.[A]
I redid this sentence because it was too long
for the textbox and crammed it into two lines.[A]
That's the way it ought to be, you see.[A]
Also, the lines are now aligned together
properly fixing up the old jumbled mess.[A]
Condensing three lines into two is again a
good idea, so always make sure to do that.[A]
All the lines now are the same length and
don't mess up the flow of the textbox.[A]
Short sentences, then long sentences, and rinse
and repeat should be avoided when possible.[A][X]

I uh, hope that cleared some things up.

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I really have liked this hack for a while now, and I like the emphasis you put on dialogue and story. It's rare to see someone care that much about making their characters more than just plot points, but actual beings that have personalities and exist. I recommend you learn how to best format text though, as all the story in the world won't help if the text is aggravating to read and unprofessional. Let me give you an example of badly formatted text and how I would fix it.

[OpenLeft][LoadFace][0x01][0x0A]Hi guys my name
is test text and I'm here to teach you about[A]
proper formatting today.[A]
Right off the bat we started with
triple lined text that could easily be condensed[A]
into two lines.[A] That's no good.[A]
Also the lines aren't aligned together properly leading to something like
this jumbled mess.[A]
Then as you can see there's one LONG line that
extends the textbox waythefuck out there.
believe me this isn't good.[A]
Oops did you spot the text skip?[A]
of corse this is laking in mispellings and etc but you[A]
should get my point.[A][X]

The above... that's an abomination. I would go through and clean it up, like so:

[OpenLeft][LoadFace][0x01][0x0A]
Hi guys my name is test text and I'm here to
teach you about proper formatting today.[A]
I redid this sentence because it was too long
for the textbox and crammed it into two lines.[A]
That's the way it ought to be, you see.[A]
Also, the lines are now aligned together
properly fixing up the old jumbled mess.[A]
Condensing three lines into two is again a
good idea, so always make sure to do that.[A]
All the lines now are the same length and
don't mess up the flow of the textbox.[A]
Short sentences, then long sentences, and rinse
and repeat should be avoided when possible.[A][X]

I uh, hope that cleared some things up.

Thanks for the tip Adolf. I'll deff keep that in mind. I'll clean it up and make sure that it will be better for the upcoming chapters.

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yay! this hack is awesome

Um. I feel like the units start way to clumped together, but that's just me.

When he says, "Scums", I feel like he should say "Scum"

When he says, "You don't owe me nothing," I feel he should use proper grammar because that is how he normally talks and is a knight.

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yay! this hack is awesome

Um. I feel like the units start way to clumped together, but that's just me.

When he says, "Scums", I feel like he should say "Scum"

When he says, "You don't owe me nothing," I feel he should use proper grammar because that is how he normally talks and is a knight.

Thanks Fuzz and alright, I got you. :)

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I really have liked this hack for a while now, and I like the emphasis you put on dialogue and story. It's rare to see someone care that much about making their characters more than just plot points, but actual beings that have personalities and exist.

This. I really like the direction this hack is taking, and i can definitely see myself getting hooked when it's playable.

You have something very promising going here NYZ, don't stop!

Oh, and if you need any help with anything, I would be more than willing to contribute graphics or whatever else you need.

Just PM me if you're interested, i'm a ROMhacker too, so i know what it's like going alone on a project like this.

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This. I really like the direction this hack is taking, and i can definitely see myself getting hooked when it's playable.

You have something very promising going here NYZ, don't stop!

Oh, and if you need any help with anything, I would be more than willing to contribute graphics or whatever else you need.

Just PM me if you're interested, i'm a ROMhacker too, so i know what it's like going alone on a project like this.

Thanks Hero! I appreciate it a lot! :)

I will deff keep that in mind.

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Yeah, I like it for the characters, too, and it just seems like a lot of fun to play :3 If you decide you want any custom graphics and stuff, let me know and I can either teach you how to insert them or do a few for you :P

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Yeah, I like it for the characters, too, and it just seems like a lot of fun to play :3 If you decide you want any custom graphics and stuff, let me know and I can either teach you how to insert them or do a few for you :P

Thanks Jubby!

I'll PM you and see take it from there

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