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Conceptual Shadow Dragon dialogue


Kysafen
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Since Shadow Dragon totally sucked and, characterization-wise, was inferior to FE6/7/8 in every way, I decided "fuck it, I'll just write dialogue for it."

And thus, what you're about to read. Tell me if any of the lines are out-of-character, or verbose, et cetra...

[spoiler=Gharnef Boss Dialogue]

[spoiler=VS Marth]

Marth:
...Gharnef. The source of all of
my troubles. Here you stand before
me, and yet...
Gharnef:
...and yet you falter, cowering
away in fear? But look! Here it
is: the Golden Fang.
Look at how it glistens in my
hand, so elegant. Yes, a fine
trophy indeed!
Marth:
At one point in time, I would
fantasize your end with my hands
around your throat.
I would I have your head dangling
from my hands right now.
But here I stand knowing it will
not be by my hand that I see you
end today. Not by my sword.
Hmph. After all, to hold your head?
I'd find my fingers too dirty from
the greasy hairs in your skull.
Gharnef:
Ha! I will create a fear so monumental
it would be an entire dimension unto
itself that you would dare address me such!
In one hand the device of your doom
as well as your father's, and in the other
the heirloom you hold so dear.
I shall end you and the line of Anri
in writhing, fearful agony, just like
how I ended your father!
Marth:
Let's have it, then!
Do your worst!

[spoiler=VS Marich]
Marich:
Gharnef, in the flesh.
Gharnef:
Hmph. Just a pathetic little boy.
Marich:
I have always wanted to ask
you something, had we met.
How did it feel to kill someone of
as much magical talent as Pontifex
Miloah?
Gharnef:
...
Marich:
No words, for someone so high and
mighty? Such a shame, then.
(if Marich is wielding Starlight)
Well, I do suppose I'm
about to see for myself.
Gharnef:
...what?!
Marich:
You see, you've left me quite insulted.
You've a stolen possession that belongs
to a most trusted friend of mine,
you've killed many of my colleagues
in Khadein,
and most of all, you've imprisoned the
one who I will pledge my heart and my
life to.
Yes, I've had no taste for the magical
killings I've had to do in this war,
but this I will most certainly enjoy.
Die, Gharnef.

[spoiler=VS Linde]
Linde:
We meet at last. After all these years
of running and hiding, finally we meet.
...Gharnef.
Gharnef:
Ah yes, Miloah's daughter. A most amusing
sight! Kneel before your superior, girl.
Or will you wave your hand and murmur that
dusty Aura tome at me? I'm afraid that
won't do a thing.
(if not wielding Starlight)
Linde:
Whether I'm to live or die by your hand
is of no consequence. Marth will make it
to your source, and you will disappear.
But if I am to die, I will not die in
submission to you...!
Gharnef:
Then I will find great pleasure in
bringing you to your knees, girl!
Then, and only then will I grant you
the death your bloodline deserves!
(if wielding Starlight)
Linde:
I have a different incantation in mind.
Your fate -to end here, by my hand- is
written in the stars...
Gharnef:
What are you babbling abou...what?
No, that's...! You! How did you...?
Linde:
You have caused me much fear and
anguish, Gharnef, and here you expect
me to bow to you?
No. I will not. I will not kneel, I will not
run, I will not bow to you, not now, not ever!
You will taste the sorrow and grief that
you have inflicted upon me and
Archanea itself.
This day... you will bow to me!

[spoiler=Death Quote]
Gharnef:
Oh, Gotoh, you scheming bastard,
you flimsy little insect!
I was the one who was supposed
to succeed you!
Only me! Me and me alone!
Not that pretentious, upstart
little bastard, Miloah!
I came first! I was diligent!
You want to speak of talent, I unsealed
and mastered the power of Imhullu!
How's that for talent, eh?!
I was older! I was wiser! I was the
greater one! I always was!
Do you hear me, I am always the
greater one!...guh!
I'm... I'm fading...
...Star...light...

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  • 2 weeks later...

hmm interesting idea, it would add a bit of bulk to the game dialogue wise I guess, that and its fairly well written (keeping to the character's history and personality's and all), though I would say to stick within the original story limits cause otherwise it might come off out of place.

a bit lengthy to but hey its vs gharnef dialogue so it works I guess, though cant the sacred regalia damage gharnef as well?

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