Marthur, do you have an idea of what are the missing parts in this whole mess that's this ending ? If there aren't too much of them, I could give a try at translating them, for completeness' sake.
EDIT : Never mind, read your first post throughoutly. I'll get a check at the Japanese script and see what I can do.
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EDIT 2 : Okay, just checked Oifaye for starters. Summerwolf translated both variations of his ending with a girl, seeing the Japanese script. The Japanese script says that :
* Ending listed as Fee/Patty's in Summerwolf's script, is also the same for : Lynn / Femina / Daisy.
* Ending listed as Lakche/Rana/Nanna in SW's script, is also the same for : Mana / Janne / Linda.
No mention of Tinny in either Endings in the Japanese script.
For the Fee/Patty/Lynn variation, I would translate the "Mmm" at the 3rd line as "Yup" instead, as in the Japanese script, mild-mannered girls (Rana, Nanna) used "Hai" (Yes), while spunkier girls (Patty, Lynn) used "Un". The spunkier girls have a slighty more casual speech pattern, which was well translated in the "Please leave Sir Oifaye to me" / "Please entrust Sir Oifaye to me" line.
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EDIT 3 :
Modified the Claude's son lover Fee and Femina version translation, and translated the rest of his potential lovers' lines.
1st variation : Fee / Patty / Lynn / Femina / Daisy / LeiliaLover :
I'm going to help the orphans.
I'll become a mother to those children, and do my best to raise them splendidly.
Claude's son :
It is all right, [Lover]... ?
Lover :
Don't worry.
You know me, if the time to do something comes, I’ll see it through, so don't worry !
2nd variation : Rana / Lakche / Nanna / Tinny / Mana / Radney / Janne / Linda(Rana / Nanna / Mana / Janne)
Sire [Claude's son], I'll help out the orphans.
I'll become a mother to those children, and do my best to raise them splendidly.
(Lakche / Radney)
[Claude's son], leave the children to me.
I'll become a mother to those children, and do my best to raise them splendidly.
(Tinny / Linda)
I'll help out the orphans.
I'll become a mother to those children, and do my best to raise them splendidly.
Claude's son :
[Lover]...
(Rana / Mana)
Don't worry...
I consider those children as if they were my own.
(Lakche / Radney)
Hee hee, don't worry,
I consider those orphans as if they were my own children !
(Nanna / Tinny / Janne / Linda)
[Claude's son], don't worry.
I consider those children as if they were my own.
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EDIT 4 :
Agustria saga now.
1) Ares' lovers lines :Summerwolf translated two of the three variations, the
Lynn/Patty one, and the
Nanna/Rana one.
* Other girls sharing the Patty/Lynn one : Fee / Femina / Daisy / Leilia
* Other girls sharing the Nanna/Rana one : Tinny / Mana / Janne / Linda
Summie made a mistake for Ares' last line : both variations get the same line. So correct both of them as :
"Heh heh... You're right. If I’m with you, I feel like I can do anything."
There's a 3rd variation. Here's the
Lakche / Radney specific one :
Aless :
And for that, [charname], your strength is necessary, too. Please help me do this.
Lakche / Radney :
Hm-hm, of course.
I will also help to rebuild Agustria.
Let’s help all those people who lost their homes in the war, the children, the aged. We’ll creat a country where they can all live their lives in peace.
Aless :
Heh heh... You're right. If I’m with you, I feel like I can do anything.
2) Lynn and Leilia's lover dead script :Lynn version Celice :
Lynn, you...
Lynn :
I don’t have a home to return to, and [Lover] is dead too, so I’m going to Agustria…
Celice :
I see...but cheer up a little.
Good things will happen to you for sure.
Lynn :
Yup, I still have my dancing, after all.
I’ve always been alone.
So from now on, I’ll just continue to live my life out alone.
Celice :
Lynn...
Leilia versionCelice :
Leilia, you...
Lynn :
I don’t have a home to return to, and Sire [Lover] is dead, so I'm planning to go to Agustria…
Celice :
I see...but cheer up a little.
Somebody wonderful’s going to discover how lovely you are, Leilia.
Lynn :
Hee hee, Lord Celice...
You’re trying to make me feel better.
But really, it’s fine this way.
I still have my dancing, after all…
I’ve always been alone.
So from now on, I’ll just continue to live my life out alone.
Celice :
Leilia...
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3) Delmudd's lovers The Japanese script don't make mention of Tinny and Linda.
Mana goes with the Rana/Lakche section of Summie's script, and Femina to the Fee/Patty/Lynn one. No mention of Leilia in the JPN script.
I'm noticing that
Tristan's lovers have different scripts than Delmudd's. Will get a shot at translating them.
Okay, here are those convos :
Rana / Lakche / Mana / Radney / LindaCelice :
You should go with Tristan too.
I can't separate the two of you.
Lover :
Eh ? So you knew about us, Sire Celice... ?
Celice :
I could tell it just by watching you two.
I wish you every happiness, [Lover].
Lover :
Yes ! Thank you very much !
Fee / Patty / Lynn / Femina / Daisy / LeiliaCelice :
You should go with Tristan too.
I can't separate the two of you.
Lover :
Eeeeeh ?! Sire Celice, so you knew about us !
Kyaaa, I'm so embarassed !!
Celice :
Heh heh,
I could tell it just by watching you two.
I wish you every happiness, [Lover].
Lover :
Yes ! Thank you very much !!!
4) Janne's convos :No loverJanne :
Sire Celice, I’ll be going to Agustria with my brother.
Celice :
So you're not returning to Lenster, Janne...
Janne :
No, my lord.... Lenster...left no regrets for me anymore…
Celice :
I see... Janne, take care of yourself. Take care of your own happiness.
Janne :
Yes, and you too, Sire Celice...
Lover deadJanne :
Lord Celice, I’ll be going to Agustria, too.
Even if I’ll never be able to forget [lover], I won’t cry. I’ll never cry.
Celice :
I understand. No matter how much it hurts, you don’t have a choice to make about it.
Please cheer up, Nanna. I'd like you to find a new life at Agustria.
Janne :
Yes, Sire Celice.
No lover and Tristan deadJanne :
Sire Celice, I'll be going to Agustria, too.
Celice :
Is that so, Janne ?
Ah... I see, you and your brother come from Agustria, am I right ?
Janne :
Yes, our father was a knight of Nodion.
He seems to have died in the battlefield, serving Princess Lachesis.
His name was Eve.
Celice :
I see, you've lost your parents in a previous battle, and now you've even lost your brother, Tristan...
I feel so sorry for you...
Janne :
You shouldn't, Sire Celice, it's alright.
But I have just a single favor to ask of you.
I beg of you, please create a world without war...
Only you can do this, Sire Celice.
5) Tristan's convo if Ares is dead :Celice :
Tristan, I have to apologize, but I want you to go to Agustria.
The royal family of Agustria has perished, and that country is engulfed in the flames of war.
I intend to go there sooner or later, but until then I'd like you to protect it.
Tristan :
Yes sir ! If that's the order of his Majesty !
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Okay, stopping there for tonight. I'll see some more tomorrow.
Also, IIRC, DarkTwilkitri posted a line on FESS (I don't remember which version) about Tristan where he says he's Eve son. If someone can find it, I'll probably add this one as well.
I checked throughoutly both of Tristan's and Janne's Epilogue Convos, and it's Janne who says they are the children of Eve, not Tristan. She's also the only one of the two to reveal this info. You can find the translation of her convo about Eve above.
Edited by AceNoctali, 04 August 2010 - 11:43 AM.