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[eCut]

I agree with Joerachi, I think the problem is that the body is one a different angle than the face. She is beautiful non-the-less!

Edit:
Nevermind , saw that bwd is helping you with it so you can prob forget my critique . :p

Edited by kittE, 26 September 2011 - 09:24 AM.

[· j e a l o u s y ·]

No, it's the hair being at a different angle than the face, coupled with the fact she seems to have a very tiny skull. Needs more back of the head and less poof on the far side.

[Astelaine]

Rejoice, for Florina has been un-derped!



My undying love to Aeorys, who twiddled a few bits around for me, and Yeti for suggesting the mouth fix. Joe and Ecut, thank you too. Your crit helped make her better. :)

Also, Jacob the storyteller gets an update:



Enjoy!

[eCut]

I always get so excited when you post something new! She looks much better now. :)

Edited by kittE, 30 October 2011 - 06:00 PM.

[Phoenix]

Rejoice, for Florina has been un-derped!

... oh my god ...
That actually brought tears to my eyes.

[Sawslothducksaucestrawman]

I really like that guy, in the white. Interesting body position and armor. Very clean.
Though I did notice on the left shoulder pad opv the two trims are basically right next to each other but with the outer(closer to the body) trim kind of above the inner one, but on the right it looks like the inner trim goes up above outer trim. Its not really a big deal, just a small inconsistency lol
Other than that it is really awesome.

[Astelaine]

... oh my god ...
That actually brought tears to my eyes.

That means alot, Phoenix. Thank you! :)

Though I did notice on the left shoulder pad opv the two trims are basically right next to each other but with the outer(closer to the body) trim kind of above the inner one, but on the right it looks like the inner trim goes up above outer trim. Its not really a big deal, just a small inconsistency lol

Crap, I see what you mean! This guy's trim has given me a ton of guff. I'll go back and polish him up again before Elibian Nights v5 is released. Thanks, Acey!

[Nayr Farros]

Rejoice, for Florina has been un-derped!



My undying love to Aeorys, who twiddled a few bits around for me, and Yeti for suggesting the mouth fix. Joe and Ecut, thank you too. Your crit helped make her better. :)

Also, Jacob the storyteller gets an update:



Enjoy!

Florina looking sweet.

Arch/Jacob looks political. I almost wanna call him a magistrate or something like that. :p

[Florina Stark]

Rejoice, for Florina has been un-derped!



My undying love to Aeorys, who twiddled a few bits around for me, and Yeti for suggesting the mouth fix. Joe and Ecut, thank you too. Your crit helped make her better. :)

Also, Jacob the storyteller gets an update:



Enjoy!

Omg....that Florina...MAY I PLEASE USE HER AS AN AVATAR! SHES SO BEAUTIFUL! AHHH THE TEARS OF JOY THEY FLOW LIKE TWIN WATERFALLS! Im so srs, thats amazing in so many ways!

[Phoenix]

That Florina really is awesome, I can't say it enough.

[Astelaine]

Florina looking sweet.
Arch/Jacob looks political. I almost wanna call him a magistrate or something like that. :p

Thanks, Nayr! And lol. Let's go with "Imperial Tax Collector."

Omg....that Florina...MAY I PLEASE USE HER AS AN AVATAR!

I'm glad you like her! As for using her for an avatar, go nuts. How could I say no, given your screen name?

That Florina really is awesome, I can't say it enough.

Thank you, that means alot. <3

[Florina Stark]

Awesome thanks! I made a little animation of her blinking frames too! :D

[Phoenix]

^I'm going to randomly stare at your avy when it shows up, sometimes, okay? (you brought this on yourself)

[Integrity]

Having been redirected here from FFtF and acting as maybe my first post in the entire Creative forum:

dat florina, holy carp

[Nayr Farros]

Thanks, Nayr! And lol. Let's go with "Imperial Tax Collector."

Well back in the day tax collectors were very very reviled. But whatever. :D

[Child of the Tenth Month]

Well back in the day tax collectors were very very reviled. But whatever. :D

They were criticized a lot? Oh, so you're reviled a lot nowadays :3

Astellllll, where's that dancer blonde mug? You must've gotten some progress done on it.

[Nayr Farros]

They were criticized a lot? Oh, so you're reviled a lot nowadays :3

Astellllll, where's that dancer blonde mug? You must've gotten some progress done on it.

Error in grammar on my part.

I meant to say that they were very hated. They technically still are.

Also go be a dick somewhere else. I don't want to start this here.

Edited by Nayr, 02 November 2011 - 06:48 PM.

[Child of the Tenth Month]

Error in grammar on my part.

I meant to say that they were very hated. They technically still are

So that still fits for you, I see I see :3

Well duh tax collectors are hated. Who wants to pay tax?

Oh but you take a shot at Arch, yet I'm not allowed to take a shot back? You're funny, Nayr :3

Edited by seph1212, 02 November 2011 - 06:49 PM.

[Nayr Farros]

So that still fits for you, I see I see :3

Well duh tax collectors are hated. Who wants to pay tax?

Oh but you take a shot at Arch, yet I'm not allowed to take a shot back? You're funny, Nayr :3

I don't see where I took a shot, I just stated a fact. Astel was the one who said tax collector. I said magistrate, which is a administrator/city official.

And if I had, you're not Arch, you're just trying to bait me.

As I said. I don't want to start here. Arch and I have come to an agreement I'm done arguing. And if you have any respect for the topic owner, you'd at least take it to PM and not spam her topic up.

Edited by Nayr, 02 November 2011 - 07:01 PM.

[Child of the Tenth Month]

I don't see where I took a shot, I just stated a fact. Astel was the one who said tax collector. I said magistrate, which is a administrator/city official.

And if I had, you're not Arch, you're just trying to bait me.

Aha ha ha, sure Nayr~

Whatever you say :3

Now, before we both get warned for being silly in Astel's topic, how about we stop?

Oh but of course I know you're just going to respond with how "I was right" or, "Lol you started it~" Because that's just how you roll :3c

As I said. I don't want to start here. Arch and I have come to an agreement I'm done arguing. And if you have any respect for the topic owner, you'd at least take it to PM and not spam her topic up.

But I could say the same thing to you! If you're such a chivalrous poster, you should be above a petty argument in Astel's thread. And yet you kept responding to me :3c I suspect you'll even respond to this, because you just have to have the last word xD

Let's see if you follow your own word, or you act hypocrisy :3

Edited by seph1212, 02 November 2011 - 07:05 PM.