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#1 Joerachi

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Posted 21 December 2010 - 10:31 PM

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#2 I have opinions

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Posted 21 December 2010 - 10:42 PM

I don't need to tell you; you already know that the shading is done wrong.

#3 Joerachi

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Posted 21 December 2010 - 10:44 PM

As said in my OP. You never need to tell me XD. I might actually make an effort to shade. I want to get the body down first before I shade. why shade something when the shape is completely wrong?

Did you like how I tried to avoid criticism?

#4 Joerachi

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Posted 16 January 2011 - 05:04 PM

Seth just got Marcus'd.

This is for my hack. And 25-years older Seth. It's almost no more than a recolor though.

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EDIT: Fix'd, Trent.

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Edited by Joerachi, 16 January 2011 - 05:43 PM.


#5 I have opinions

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Posted 16 January 2011 - 05:04 PM

He also appears to have a lot of his sprite cut off...

#6 Joerachi

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Posted 16 January 2011 - 05:06 PM

Probably. I have a crappy sprite sheet ;-;

Will fix.

Edited by Joerachi, 16 January 2011 - 05:06 PM.


#7 Joerachi

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Posted 17 January 2011 - 06:46 PM

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This is for my hack, and this is one of NeimixColm's children. If you're going to critise, come back 10 minutes after you do so. I feel guilty 'bout these double post's you know
EDIT: BESIDES the Top-right of the hair (OPV), feel free to critise. I just caught that.

Edited by Joerachi, 17 January 2011 - 06:47 PM.


#8 Cymbeline

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Posted 17 January 2011 - 08:29 PM

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This is for my hack, and this is one of NeimixColm's children. If you're going to critise, come back 10 minutes after you do so. I feel guilty 'bout these double post's you know
EDIT: BESIDES the Top-right of the hair (OPV), feel free to critise. I just caught that.


I can't tell if that is the hairline or bangs. However, assuming it is the hairline, it needs to be raised higher so that she has more of a forehead. Also, the armor on her shoulder looks too large so making it smaller would be good. On the right side of her right eye (our right), there is a blue dot next to the hair, but on the skin.. Lastly, the biggest problem to me is that she looks like she lacks eyebrows. I'm not sure if that's her design or not, though. . . so. . . yeah.

Edited by Cymbeline, 17 January 2011 - 08:30 PM.


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Posted 17 January 2011 - 08:30 PM

She does lack eyebrows.

#10 Joerachi

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Posted 18 January 2011 - 12:27 PM

Oh god, I always forget eyebrows. Will fix. Please check in in about 10 minutes.

EDIT: Ok so more like a few hours.
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I redid the hair. Suggestions on how to fix?

Edited by Joerachi, 20 January 2011 - 01:03 AM.


#11 Joerachi

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Posted 20 January 2011 - 12:54 AM

Step aside, the crappiness bin is coming.

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Again, for my hack (Where AmeliaxEwan is canon :>) And I can't extinguish all of the Nino :C

Oh, and a more manry version of my persona. Simple splice with some doctoring though, so not that impressive.

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Edited by Joerachi, 20 January 2011 - 01:04 AM.


#12 Cymbeline

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Posted 20 January 2011 - 01:12 AM

Oh god, I always forget eyebrows. Will fix. Please check in in about 10 minutes.

EDIT: Ok so more like a few hours.
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I redid the hair. Suggestions on how to fix?


The hair should be a bit thicker or less flat, in my opinion.

As for the other two: Amewan is nice, though the hand seems maybe a bit too small. Also, there needs to be some shading under her shoulder armor.

For your persona, the collar needs more shading to define between the skin and collar.

#13 Phoenix

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Posted 20 January 2011 - 01:15 AM

Oh god, I always forget eyebrows. Will fix. Please check in in about 10 minutes.

EDIT: Ok so more like a few hours.
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I redid the hair. Suggestions on how to fix?

There's no definition or detail.
It looks a bit pillow shaded in places.
The placement of the hair makes the head look smaller than you probably meant it to be. (try filling in more of it on the right side)

Just a few things I guess. I like the little red Nino character ^_^

#14 Joerachi

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Posted 20 January 2011 - 01:31 AM

Thanks guys for the tips on to make this suck less.


Changes: Hand is slightly bigger, shading under the shoulder pad.
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Changes: Shading around the neck, slight clean up around the neck.
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Changes: Defined the lock of hair to the right (OPV) slightly more, Less pillow shading.
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EDIT: The third one is missing a outline pixel around the left (OPV). Thought I should point that out.

Edited by Joerachi, 20 January 2011 - 01:35 AM.


#15 I have opinions

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Posted 20 January 2011 - 11:31 AM

Joe, if you got rid of the hand in the first one, it would actually be pretty good.

As for the remake of your personal mug I think that's what it is it's looking a metric ton better than the original, except for that neck shading.

Also, just scrap the third one XD

#16 Joerachi

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Posted 20 January 2011 - 03:49 PM

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Here's a version without the hands, if it makes any difference.

EDIT: Just noticed that this one has an outline fix and slightly more saturated blue color too. So, yeah.

Edited by Joerachi, 20 January 2011 - 04:18 PM.


#17 Joerachi

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Posted 29 January 2011 - 07:56 PM

I'm back after a bit and I have my first FC done (Hide your children)


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Have at it.

Edited by Joerachi, 29 January 2011 - 07:59 PM.


#18 I have opinions

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Posted 29 January 2011 - 07:59 PM

Joe.

Stop FCing.

Do not proceed to FC, ever, until you have grasped the concept of advanced splicing and/or body proportions.

Thank you.

#19 Joerachi

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Posted 29 January 2011 - 08:04 PM

Why thank ya :B

The lower half was done under the advice of S1WD. Here's what originally I had:

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EDIT: Oh dear. Wrong image. Herp y Derp.

Edited by Joerachi, 29 January 2011 - 08:16 PM.


#20 I have opinions

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Posted 29 January 2011 - 08:05 PM

Sigh...

Alright. Keep truckin'. Have fun with your FCs.




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