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[Joerachi]

After having a near heart attack,I have it at a slightly larger size. Head is a little small though, but I think it's good otherwise, now prove me wrong, everyone

Edited by Joerachi, 01 February 2011 - 11:43 PM.

[Child of the Tenth Month]

After having a near heart attack,I have it at a slightly larger size. Head is a little small though, but I think it's good otherwise, now prove me wrong, everyone

Gladly.



I took one of the smaller characters in FE, Lalum, neoned her and stuck her on top of your sprite, and, as you can see, your sprite is ridiculously small in comparison to it.

Joe, if you really wanna custom, I suggest doing what Boney suggested. Custom things over an already existing FE sprite.

Edited by seph1212, 02 February 2011 - 12:01 AM.

[Joerachi]

Alright, made note of that. How is the sprite in terms other than anatomy?

[Child of the Tenth Month]

The hair shading is extremely flat, and there's no easily distinguishable light source.

The neck's got some pretty bad pillow shading as well.

[Joerachi]

LOOK AT ALL OF THIS DUST.


Armor knight man.


FC has been worked on and improved (?????)


And a quick update on my persona. This better?

Edited by Joerachi, 15 February 2011 - 02:41 PM.

[Cymbeline]

LOOK AT ALL OF THIS DUST.


Armor knight man.

His head is not in angle with the body. His head is also too small for the armor, and the shading on the skin around his bangs needs to be fixed. I think a change of armor would be best.

FC has been worked on and improved (?????)

It's improved, but there are still problems. Such as her right (our left) eye being tilted (the bottom part of her eye is angled). . . when her right eye isn't. Her right (our left) breast also looks off, but she could maybe have a large chest. Anyway, here are a few other problems I noticed:



Yellow boxes: Hair shading needs to be fixed. Referencing some FE mugs will help.
Wine(ish) box: Shading is awkward around the neck and collarbone.
Pink box: Nose is wrong. I'm not sure if you're going for a front view or if her head is turned. . . So, if front view: fix the bottom part of the nose and reference FE6 Anna's mug to see how the nose should be at that angle. If it's a side view, you might want to reference Lyn's semi-forward gaze mug but also fix the eye to show that it is a (somewhat) side view.
Red lines: Where I think the neck and the shoulder should be (your mileage may vary. . . probably).

And a quick update on my persona. This better?

Better. However, the shading around the bangs needs to be fixed and also where the neck meets the collar.

[Joerachi]

Moved the mouth down a bit, Made the collar less weird, Made the shoulders lower, and shaded the bangs.`Now tell where I screwed up.

Edited by Joerachi, 16 February 2011 - 06:46 AM.

[Astelaine]

Move the mouth back up, it's too far down now.

[eCut]

Move the mouth back up, it's too far down now.

I agree.

Also, the neck and stuff looked better before. Now it looks like he has a really long neck and nothing else. What Cymbeline meant was there needs to be some anti-aliasing where the neck meets the collar.
Here are some examples:

I drew on your sprite in red as well to show how I think the neck should like(though that is purely my opinion and you may think otherwise).
Anywho, I hope this helps! And keep at it cause you sprite is really coming along.

Edited by Ecut, 16 February 2011 - 09:36 AM.

[Joerachi]

It's really tough to do when the Collar shares the same color as the skin D;

[CrushCrushCrush]

So is Eliwoods! look at the example. And make the neck thicker like Ecut says. Make the darkest hair tone darker as well.

[Joerachi]

Well, here's what I have now. What's wrong with it now?

Edit:

Also, because I felt like it. Yes, horribly made.

Edited by Joerachi, 18 February 2011 - 12:57 AM.

[Joerachi]

Poste de double!



New FC, feel free to tear it apart.



Update



Update Dos.

Edited by Joerachi, 04 March 2011 - 03:11 PM.

[Joerachi]

It's been almost 3 weeks, and you people need something to tear apart, so hear you go.

Edited by Joerachi, 19 March 2011 - 01:23 PM.

[Joerachi]

SPRITE THREAD, GET OUT OF THE 2ND PAGE.

Back to splicing~

T-TRENT, WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH THAT GUN?
I liked the face too much ;~; This was based off of a crush, I'm irrational right now. Sorry ;~;

Also, WIP Soldier Revamp.


Trying to whip the Magvel loldiers into FE10 shape!

Edited by Joerachi, 12 April 2011 - 06:05 PM.

[69']

The girl should have some more shading on the hair as well as more hair at the back of her head.

Edited by Shirona, 12 April 2011 - 06:08 PM.

[Child of the Tenth Month]

What Kai said. It looks like she's wearing a giant glob of playdough on her bald head.

[Joerachi]

Alright, on it. Is the face/neck OK (Bar the chin shading)?

[Child of the Tenth Month]

Face is decent, neck looks like a trapezoid. It should be straight. You're using L'arachel for the body, reference her neck.

[Joerachi]

More hair was added in the back, the neck is more L'Arachel-y, and the hair isn't as doughy. I think it looked like that because I was aiming for the bang to overlap the hairline, and I guess that was an older version, given it probably wasn't as different.

Some problems I can make out of this is that the neck-shoulder area seems flat to me, but I can't tell for sure. The left(opv) eye seems weird to me, but Iunno. I hate how the hair is making the ear look weird ;~;