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Side of face is flat, and the ear is too close to the eye. Shading along bangs is a bit heavy, or otherwise lacking, in the wrong areas.
Why would you want to pillow that bikini? It was shaded adequately before.
Flabby, flat arm.

[Joerachi]

For SoS Splicin Comp. 8, Lakche weeee.

EDIT: Also, I don't know what fixes I made here, since my computer fell and the battery popped out, bleeeh.

Edited by Joerachi, 26 May 2011 - 10:31 PM.

[Chalis]

I like her. No idea what's going on where her hair meets the armor on the right but other than that, it is a nice and clean splice.

As for this Ursula/Tate thing over here, there are three noticeable problems. Zoom and study.


The little + marks are my own minor fixes. There are plenty of different ways to do it, but looking really closely at the similarities from past FE mugs and your own are the best ways to figure out how certain shadings is done.

[47948201]

I don't quite know what's going on when it meets the armor on the left, either. IIRC Lakche's original sprite has her leaning backwards, and that's why her hair sticks out forward. As is I'd kinda recommend doing something with the back of her hair. It looks pretty boring. Also, the collar on our right side sorta just goes off into nowhere and disappears.

[Joerachi]

Kind of a SM revamp WIP-y thing. Point out any things that look weird plz?

Also fixes weee.

[deranger]

Proportions look ape like. small, thin legs, giant torso, and arms longer than his legs (though his baggy clothing makes everything look weird.)

[Amelia]

Reshade that part of shoulder. Jagged.

Uhm, weird looking eyebrow.

Reshade neeeck.

[Joerachi]

Derp.

EDIT:

Edited by Joerachi, 30 May 2011 - 04:03 PM.

[Primefusion]

The legs on the battle sprite seem kind of floppy because they're coming out at an odd angle.

[Joerachi]

Doopdoop, splicing comp

[Hamlet]

Pink: The hair shading here is awkward. The way the shading is here doesn't mesh with the rest of the hair properly.
Blue: It's awkward how the 4th skin shade is used twice like that. It makes the top of the ear look globby and deformed.
Purple: The way this is shaded seems awkward to me.

Otherwise it's very good. :3

[Joerachi]

K so, I retried hair shading. Heavily referenced Trent's Refia sprite for this.

[Psych]

That....actually looks really good. Maybe more separation on the bangs and things and more forehead shading though. There seems to be something wonky with his left eyebrow, and the cape could probably be worked on.

[CT075]

Right (OPV) shoulder is a little too far out. Bring it in a pixel or two.

[Joerachi]

Doopdoopdoop.

Edited by Joerachi, 12 June 2011 - 02:21 PM.

[deranger]

I like it. I remember way back when it looked so damn similar to one of my mugs. The hair actually reminds me of my own haircut haha.

[Joerachi]

Fixed some hair issues, like hair shape and such.

[Joerachi]

JoshuaxMarisa totally canon

Edited by Joerachi, 15 June 2011 - 11:17 PM.

[BlackShadow]

JoshuaxMarisa totally canon

Those strap things look weird because of the same colour, although that may be me. And lol Dressup!Anna's Daughter. Pretty good.

[Joerachi]

Needed to make him taller to be hack insertable lololol. Made some fixes to the cape. Any suggestions, especially to the bottom left (OPV)?