Joerachi's Emporium of Sprites of Differing Quality
Posted 25 May 2011 - 12:11 AM
Side of face is flat, and the ear is too close to the eye. Shading along bangs is a bit heavy, or otherwise lacking, in the wrong areas.
Why would you want to pillow that bikini? It was shaded adequately before.
Flabby, flat arm.
Posted 26 May 2011 - 08:40 PM
For SoS Splicin Comp. 8, Lakche weeee.
EDIT: Also, I don't know what fixes I made here, since my computer fell and the battery popped out, bleeeh.
Edited by Joerachi, 26 May 2011 - 10:31 PM.
Posted 29 May 2011 - 01:27 AM
I like her. No idea what's going on where her hair meets the armor on the right but other than that, it is a nice and clean splice.
As for this Ursula/Tate thing over here, there are three noticeable problems. Zoom and study.
The little + marks are my own minor fixes. There are plenty of different ways to do it, but looking really closely at the similarities from past FE mugs and your own are the best ways to figure out how certain shadings is done.
Posted 29 May 2011 - 02:46 AM
Posted 29 May 2011 - 10:20 PM
Kind of a SM revamp WIP-y thing. Point out any things that look weird plz?
Also fixes weee.
Posted 29 May 2011 - 10:25 PM
Proportions look ape like. small, thin legs, giant torso, and arms longer than his legs (though his baggy clothing makes everything look weird.)
Posted 29 May 2011 - 11:41 PM
Reshade that part of shoulder. Jagged.
Uhm, weird looking eyebrow.
Posted 30 May 2011 - 05:09 PM
Posted 08 June 2011 - 02:20 PM
Pink: The hair shading here is awkward. The way the shading is here doesn't mesh with the rest of the hair properly.
Blue: It's awkward how the 4th skin shade is used twice like that. It makes the top of the ear look globby and deformed.
Purple: The way this is shaded seems awkward to me.
Otherwise it's very good. :3
Posted 12 June 2011 - 01:59 PM
K so, I retried hair shading. Heavily referenced Trent's Refia sprite for this.
Posted 12 June 2011 - 02:03 PM
Posted 12 June 2011 - 02:08 PM
Posted 12 June 2011 - 02:19 PM
Edited by Joerachi, 12 June 2011 - 02:21 PM.
Posted 12 June 2011 - 09:17 PM
Posted 15 June 2011 - 11:11 PM
Edited by Joerachi, 15 June 2011 - 11:17 PM.
Posted 15 June 2011 - 11:38 PM
JoshuaxMarisa totally canon
Those strap things look weird because of the same colour, although that may be me.
Posted 16 June 2011 - 04:21 AM
Needed to make him taller to be hack insertable lololol. Made some fixes to the cape. Any suggestions, especially to the bottom left (OPV)?
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