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[Joerachi]

LolnomoreOP

Edited by Joerachi, 21 June 2011 - 01:44 AM.

[Child of the Tenth Month]

I don't need to tell you; you already know that the shading is done wrong.

[Joerachi]

As said in my OP. You never need to tell me . I might actually make an effort to shade. I want to get the body down first before I shade. why shade something when the shape is completely wrong?

Did you like how I tried to avoid criticism?

[Joerachi]

Seth just got Marcus'd.

This is for my hack. And 25-years older Seth. It's almost no more than a recolor though.



EDIT: Fix'd, Trent.

Edited by Joerachi, 16 January 2011 - 05:43 PM.

[Child of the Tenth Month]

He also appears to have a lot of his sprite cut off...

[Joerachi]

Probably. I have a crappy sprite sheet ;-;

Will fix.

Edited by Joerachi, 16 January 2011 - 05:06 PM.

[Joerachi]

This is for my hack, and this is one of NeimixColm's children. If you're going to critise, come back 10 minutes after you do so. I feel guilty 'bout these double post's you know
EDIT: BESIDES the Top-right of the hair (OPV), feel free to critise. I just caught that.

Edited by Joerachi, 17 January 2011 - 06:47 PM.

[Cymbeline]

This is for my hack, and this is one of NeimixColm's children. If you're going to critise, come back 10 minutes after you do so. I feel guilty 'bout these double post's you know
EDIT: BESIDES the Top-right of the hair (OPV), feel free to critise. I just caught that.

I can't tell if that is the hairline or bangs. However, assuming it is the hairline, it needs to be raised higher so that she has more of a forehead. Also, the armor on her shoulder looks too large so making it smaller would be good. On the right side of her right eye (our right), there is a blue dot next to the hair, but on the skin.. Lastly, the biggest problem to me is that she looks like she lacks eyebrows. I'm not sure if that's her design or not, though. . . so. . . yeah.

Edited by Cymbeline, 17 January 2011 - 08:30 PM.

[Child of the Tenth Month]

She does lack eyebrows.

[Joerachi]

Oh god, I always forget eyebrows. Will fix. Please check in in about 10 minutes.

EDIT: Ok so more like a few hours.


I redid the hair. Suggestions on how to fix?

Edited by Joerachi, 20 January 2011 - 01:03 AM.

[Joerachi]

Step aside, the crappiness bin is coming.



Again, for my hack (Where AmeliaxEwan is canon :>) And I can't extinguish all of the Nino :C

Oh, and a more manry version of my persona. Simple splice with some doctoring though, so not that impressive.

Edited by Joerachi, 20 January 2011 - 01:04 AM.

[Cymbeline]

Oh god, I always forget eyebrows. Will fix. Please check in in about 10 minutes.

EDIT: Ok so more like a few hours.


I redid the hair. Suggestions on how to fix?

The hair should be a bit thicker or less flat, in my opinion.

As for the other two: Amewan is nice, though the hand seems maybe a bit too small. Also, there needs to be some shading under her shoulder armor.

For your persona, the collar needs more shading to define between the skin and collar.

[Phoenix]

Oh god, I always forget eyebrows. Will fix. Please check in in about 10 minutes.

EDIT: Ok so more like a few hours.


I redid the hair. Suggestions on how to fix?

There's no definition or detail.
It looks a bit pillow shaded in places.
The placement of the hair makes the head look smaller than you probably meant it to be. (try filling in more of it on the right side)

Just a few things I guess. I like the little red Nino character

[Joerachi]

Thanks guys for the tips on to make this suck less.


Changes: Hand is slightly bigger, shading under the shoulder pad.


Changes: Shading around the neck, slight clean up around the neck.


Changes: Defined the lock of hair to the right (OPV) slightly more, Less pillow shading.


EDIT: The third one is missing a outline pixel around the left (OPV). Thought I should point that out.

Edited by Joerachi, 20 January 2011 - 01:35 AM.

[Child of the Tenth Month]

Joe, if you got rid of the hand in the first one, it would actually be pretty good.

As for the remake of your personal mug I think that's what it is it's looking a metric ton better than the original, except for that neck shading.

Also, just scrap the third one

[Joerachi]

Here's a version without the hands, if it makes any difference.

EDIT: Just noticed that this one has an outline fix and slightly more saturated blue color too. So, yeah.

Edited by Joerachi, 20 January 2011 - 04:18 PM.

[Joerachi]

I'm back after a bit and I have my first FC done (Hide your children)

Spoiler - Normal Sized

Have at it.

Edited by Joerachi, 29 January 2011 - 07:59 PM.

[Child of the Tenth Month]

Joe.

Stop FCing.

Do not proceed to FC, ever, until you have grasped the concept of advanced splicing and/or body proportions.

Thank you.

[Joerachi]

Why thank ya :B

The lower half was done under the advice of S1WD. Here's what originally I had:

Spoiler -

EDIT: Oh dear. Wrong image. Herp y Derp.

Edited by Joerachi, 29 January 2011 - 08:16 PM.

[Child of the Tenth Month]

Sigh...

Alright. Keep truckin'. Have fun with your FCs.