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[L95]

FC dancer chick.

I'm not good at boobs.



Her neck is too long, isn't it?

Edited by L95, 22 January 2012 - 06:13 PM.

[blllack&goldmedalmamba]

FC dancer chick.

I'm not good at boobs.



Her neck is too long, isn't it?

i like. especially the eyes / hair and the details on the outfit. i think the neck seems a little long because of the shading connecting the shoulder. at least that's how it looks to me. good job =)

[L95]

Whee?



I think his head/hair is a tad too big, I also can't shade jewels :B

why do I notice everything wrong with it after I post it?

Edited by L95, 04 March 2012 - 08:36 PM.

[blllack&goldmedalmamba]

i think the hair is just fine, but the angle of his face / arched eyebrow throws me off-makes me think he's unproportional (i'm aware it's not a word) in that department

the only thing i would change about the hair is the top left bang maybe, the curl is offsetting compared to the bangs on the right which are straight and sharp down; maybe have it curl left and sharper / thinner to go along with the rest of the bangs

overall i like it, he comes off as a smug badass (villain?) to me

[Myke]

What I do: every fifteen minutes or so, zoom out and flip the image horizontally. The brain gets tricked into thinking it's a new image and you notice all the things you had been ignoring before.

gl

[Dr.Sholes]

I really like it, I think the armor could use more shading but it's pretty cool looking.

[Child of the Tenth Month]

His face is all scrunched up.

Squishy squishy face.

[Jubby]

It's not bad in shading dept and all but his entire face needs to be shifted up

[Hamlet]

Not to mention the obnoxiously large forehead. Pretty sure his head isn't that disproportional, even at the angle he's at.

[Jubby]

No the head works, just the features are in the wrong places and such :P

[L95]

Is the face Better?, Worse?

[Jubby]

Much improved but still needs a few more pixels higher I'd say, right now his mouth is almost in his neck still :(

[blllack&goldmedalmamba]

way better but i feel he lost the smug look now and looks more soft (i dont know if you were going for the smug badass look)

[L95]

I'll work on the expression once I get the face right.

Is it moved up enough?

Edited by L95, 04 March 2012 - 09:10 PM.

[Hamlet]

Move the ear up a few pixels to match, but it looks good now.

[L95]

Evil faic.



Any issues?

[Dr.Sholes]

The eyes are looking pretty awesome.

[Khrene Cleaver]

He has no neck

The hair doesn't make sense, he has a part down the middle like this but he somehow has bangs. ANother thing where the part is really defined that's where the hair connects to the scalp which is why his head/hair looked big to you earlier.

Shading is nice colors, are nice keep up the good fight and whatnot kaythnxbye.

Edited by Khrene Cleaver, 06 March 2012 - 05:56 PM.

[L95]

I don't get his hair either lD

So, should I move the pauldrons down, or the head up?I do need to adjust the base, either way, I guess.

Edited by L95, 06 March 2012 - 06:11 PM.

[∑-sigma-]

Might just be me, but that mug does remind me a little of Vamp's Yurius..