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[I have opinions]

Her bangs look pretty chunky and unrefined, and her hair angle isn't matching her face. Bangs, go look at Lute, Prissy, maybe Serra; or you might want to try splicing on someone else's hair, hair that might fit the angle better, like... maybe Rebecca? Vanessa's, maybe.

[Ponih]

I wanted to do something more like Eiji Niizuma's hair from bakuman (not as short), but I think I got it all wrong, then? >_<"


For bangs you mean the fringe, right? ò.ò

[I have opinions]

Oh hi Eiji, haven't seen you in a while



Yeah, right there.

And for Eiji's hair... pffffffwell. I don't really know anyone you could splice to get that xD

Try your hand at customing it, and if all else fails, wait until you're better at spriting to try customing it in the future?

[Ponih]

thanks, Seph1212, I edited that fringe now, when I'll make some new updates to Marie's mug I'll post it again! <3
For now, enjoy this "new" mug, Amber XD

Well, her face is from another mug I made some time ago for a splice competition, if I remember correctly, the three mugs were Tate, Lute and... Yunno, I think?

anyway, here's the "first" mug


Sylphide.
Yeah, I know, her colours are awful == but I made her a lot of time ago, so forgive me, please! xD
I think Amber i muuuuch better than her. °-°

[I have opinions]

Amber is much better, but her neck is kinda long and her bangs are a tad chunky around here:

The roots/crown could also use some work, but I'd say it's a pretty good mug overall. Much, much better than the splice below it xD

[ConnellShuuji]

I prefer the second one, even if it's the older one.

By the way, seph1212, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to insult you, it was only a joke. I wanted to offend Niharu.

Edited by ConnellShuuji, 08 September 2011 - 09:42 AM.

[Ponih]

Yaaaay
Marie's a lot better now xD

[Ponih]

Ahem, I'm back with some sprites. XD
I'm sorry for my absence, but anyway I would like some comments on these new mugs ^O^



1) Her name's Kleo. I don't know what her class could possibly be! But I think I'll go with a Wind mage/Shaman
2) I was rying to make a Tengaar mug, but it turned out like this. I don't know if it's similar enough ._.
3) Berenice! she's some kind of Mage/troubadour princess. I like her a lot XD
4) ...just a mercenary. He doesn't even have a name yet XD At first I wanted to create a Male Lyn, so the base for his face is Lyndis' XD

Edited by Niharu, 27 November 2011 - 10:20 AM.

[Freohr Datia]

Ahem, I'm back with some sprites. XD
I'm sorry for my absence, but anyway I would like some comments on these new mugs ^O^



1) Her name's Chleo. I don't know what her class could possibly be! But I think I'll go with a Wind mage/Shaman
2) I was rying to make a Tengaar mug, but it turned out like this. I don't know if it's similar enough ._.
3) Berenice! she's some kind of Mage/troubadour princess. I like her a lot XD
4) ...just a mercenary. He doesn't even have a name yet XD At first I wanted to create a Male Lyn, so the base for his face is Lyndis' XD

Wow I really like these! Even though I can look and see where the parts came from, you make them look as if you had made those all up on your own. I really like Chleo and the Tengaarish mug. One thing I can see on Berenice is how it looks like the hair is implying the back of her head is a little big, or something that almost doesn't look like the shape the head should be in.

And on Tengaarish's (xD) top right shoulder there is a stray skin-color pixel where there should be an outline. =] And also the sleeve thing on the right shoulder could use a bit work on the shading perhaps? Like maybe on the inner part of the sleeve it could use a bit more shade I guess.

Oh and Chleo's also missing a bit of outline herself on the bottom left and top left of her hair.

Male merc definitely looks like he has too much shading on the right of his neck, or at least too much of the two darkest skin tones =o

Don't think I really see anything else though.

[Amelia]

Very nice character concept and poses. I like them a lot.

You're improving, keep it up!

[Ponih]

Thanks everyone *_*
I have only 2 mugs to show you today XD



The first one is a thief, while the girl is ... just a villager. I wanted to make a medic or someting like that, but I think that "villager" fits her better. °_°"

[deranger]

nice. Although, I think the thief has a bit long of a neck

[Raven]

Your villager girl, I can't help but feel her head is too bulged up top in comparison to the rest of her head. Maybe it's just me.

But, I really like your works. Keep it up and keep improving as you have been.

Also Seph, it looks to me as though Niharu and connellShuuji know each other, it's probably just best to leave them alone in regards to their teasing.

Edited by V-Raven, 04 December 2011 - 08:58 PM.

[Jubby]

That thief looks awesome, maybe just put a shirt or something near the bottom of his neck (Like an undershirt?) to make it looks less long XP

[Ponih]

I made his neck shorter of about 2px



and also...


Older Rebecca!
Yeah, I love braids! <3

Edited by Niharu, 06 December 2011 - 02:37 PM.

[ConnellShuuji]

LESS BRAIDS, MORE B**BS! (and less giraffes.)

Joking aside, i fell in love with the thief. *_* And Tengaar's shoulders are kinda strange... It seems like she shrugs her shoulders...

Edited by ConnellShuuji, 06 December 2011 - 04:53 PM.

[deranger]

It's hard to locate where the thief's shoulders are, so as long as his head's about lined up with where legult's was (after adjusting to the head turn) I'd say its good. Blah, I don't know. I like him either way.
Older Rebecca's still pretty young. Looks Rebecca-y enough.
Good stuff.

[Raven]

Rebecca needs to keep her bandana and cute facial features. Also a larger chest. Because boobs n' stuff.

[Ponih]

thank you for your tips ^-^
I'll see what I can do with these two. And I'll try to give Rebecca a bandana XD

Edited by Niharu, 07 December 2011 - 08:44 AM.

[ConnellShuuji]

And I'll try to give Rebecca a bandana XD

...and boobs, please.