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[ConnellShuuji]

Ys, she's cuter now. °w°

Her brother, Demotius!

Uhm... The left eye (<=) seems strange to me... And the lef wisp (<=) is shorter than the right one (=>). It may be only an impression of mine, though. XD
All in all, he's handsome. *_*

[Warg]

Demoneenah left eye (our right) should go one pixel to the right (our left) and Demotius right eye (our left) should go one pixel under or the left eye (our right) one pixel above, to make them look more natural

Edited by Warg, 18 December 2011 - 09:05 AM.

[Amelia]

He has a rather long neck, Niharu. You should shorten it a px or two. o3o

[Ponih]

Roger! ^o^
I just finished a custom mug! Ilyana!


I don't know how to shade her right pigtail. I don't like it as it is now é_é

[Jubby]

Her headband thing looks kinda awkward... But other than that, I like it :P Ilyana's awesome. (I couldn't see anything wrong with the pigtail)

[Ponih]

Demoneenah left eye (our right) should go one pixel to the right (our left) and Demotius right eye (our left) should go one pixel under or the left eye (our right) one pixel above, to make them look more natural

He has a rather long neck, Niharu. You should shorten it a px or two. o3o

Thank you so much for pointing out those errors >*<
here, I fixed the eyes and also shortened Demotius' neck

Her headband thing looks kinda awkward... But other than that, I like it :P Ilyana's awesome. (I couldn't see anything wrong with the pigtail)

Yeah, she's awesome. *_* I think she's one my favorites from FE PoR and RD, along with Aran and Pelleas!
Also, fixed some things and tried to fix that circlet thing >_<

Maybe she's too pale. o_ò But in-game they said she's really pale ad sick-looking, so I don't know if I'll have to fix her colours ò.O?

[Jubby]

You could try lightening the clothes' colors, they seem a bit dark to me :P (And yes she's one of mine too, nomnomnom)

[Ponih]

Done!
Fixed her eyes and lightened the clothes!

[Phoenix]

She looks like a 'Tranquil'. Maybe it's just me but her shoulders seem kind of small too. I'm not sure if her torso is just turned to the side, the hair is tricking me, or they're actually too short ... err maybe it's just the hair.

[Jubby]

Awwww, it looks nice! Ilyana's so caaaute :3

[Warg]

Dont know why but i dont like her eyes, i think they could be more dark

[L95]

They need to be more relaxed, right now she looks kinda wide-eyed. The first one had better eyes, IMO.

Edited by L95, 19 December 2011 - 02:32 PM.

[Sawslothducksaucestrawman]

I agree, I think the previous eyes look better. They just fit the sprite more. And they fit Ilyana more. Well they fit FE10 Ilyana more, she kind of has those sad looking eyes. I also agree that her shoulders are looking a little thin. I mean I know shes small, but it kinda looks like she'd have a hard time holding up her head kinda a little bit.
Other than that, it is a wonderful sprite. I'm kind of a big fan of Ilyana myself lol.

[Ponih]

Mweh >.<
this is something I did for the splicing competition.

I like her face. xD


Edit:
Here's Sansa, a shaman. ^^


I think something is wrong with the fur... I need to learn how to shade it properly...

Edited by Niharu, 02 January 2012 - 12:54 PM.

[ConnellShuuji]

Here's Sansa, a shaman. ^^


I think something is wrong with the fur... I need to learn how to shade it properly...

At first, I mistook her for a man. XDD
I think her braid looks strange...

[Thor Odinson]

Not bad :3. Might want some shading on the far cheek, though. @ Sansa

Edited by Luminescent Blade, 02 January 2012 - 01:48 PM.

[Ponih]

Now I realize why her face looked so clean! I feel so stupid XD
thanks for pointing out ^o^

[Lassie]

Niharu, why are you becoming so good? It's insane. And awesome. 
Previously I barely looked at your sprites becuase they werent anything special, but now, you're among the topics I check with each update, and among the ones I WANT to see updated.
Can't wait to see you improve more. Keep it up!

[Amelia]

I agree with Fawful. I seriously like your sprites, I can't say anything else beside keep it up. You're like the next Astel or eCut, Haru. :3

[Lassie]

^Exactly who I had in mind to which to compare to.
Obviously you're not as good. YET. And that's the thing, you improve so fast, just like they did.