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[Tricky Dick]

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Go ahead and criticize here. I'm open to anything you got to toss at me.

Keep in mind that the title is simply what I'm doing. I'm just rambling. My thoughts aren't exactly coherent so pardon me if I jump from place to place.

[SeverIan]

And on top of that, I'm arguing with a little girl (on the interwebz of course) over the fact that her writing is shit.

Which is entirely your fault if you view this as a negative :P

I came up with the most brilliant thesis ever. The health of father-daughter relationships and if that love can actually hurt both parties. What did she do? Shrugged. B+. I think. Might not have even gotten that.

Thesis does not make essay. Essay makes thesis. I also shrug at this topic. "Love hurts" is an unsurprising and old idea.

Good luck in the army.

[Tricky Dick]

Appreciated.

And yeah, I know a thesis doesn't make an essay. But we got graded on individual parts of the essay as we were working on it.