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Posted 01 December 2011 - 04:35 PM
Go ahead and criticize here. I'm open to anything you got to toss at me.
Keep in mind that the title is simply what I'm doing. I'm just rambling. My thoughts aren't exactly coherent so pardon me if I jump from place to place.
Posted 01 December 2011 - 05:02 PM
Which is entirely your fault if you view this as a negative :P
And on top of that, I'm arguing with a little girl (on the interwebz of course) over the fact that her writing is shit.
Thesis does not make essay. Essay makes thesis. I also shrug at this topic. "Love hurts" is an unsurprising and old idea.
I came up with the most brilliant thesis ever. The health of father-daughter relationships and if that love can actually hurt both parties. What did she do? Shrugged. B+. I think. Might not have even gotten that.
Good luck in the army.
Posted 01 December 2011 - 05:12 PM
And yeah, I know a thesis doesn't make an essay. But we got graded on individual parts of the essay as we were working on it.
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