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[Sangyul]

I originally wrote this story for my online friend, Rami, for a Secret Santa project. It's not one of my best works, but the people who reviewed it seemed to think that it was at least passable, so I want to hear what people on here think about it. Here's a link to the story:

http://www.fanfictio.../1/Mountainside

It's supposed to be funny. Not sure if I succeeded, but as long as people enjoy it. :P