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#1 Star Brom

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 06:28 PM

Story

Here is where one may discuss the great work of genius that is Fire Bromblem, and where I may post updates on the progress of the story.

Notes:

Please do not post in the original topic. If you have something to say, say it here.


If this story was made into a movie, it would probably be rated R. I do not plan on toning it down, and if you're a wee kiddie, I highly recommend you stay away though you shall remain an unenlightened sod.

So far, I have already completed about 10 chapters, and the should all be posted sometime tonight.

Also, I always spell mee with two e's and omit an 'a' from agin. 'Tis just an eccentricity of mine.

#2 shadowofchaos

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 06:40 PM

If this story was made into a movie, it would probably be rated R. I do not plan on toning it down, and if you're a wee kiddie, I highly recommend you stay away though you shall remain an unenlightened sod.


Oh fudge... you're here too now.

At least VincentASM is here to prevent this place from turning into FEChan as well.

#3 Esme

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 06:40 PM

I must say that I really enjoy how INNOVATIVE your story is.

Bravo~

#4 Star Brom

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 06:52 PM

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'Twas a good, festive year indeed.

#5 Groot

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 07:29 PM

Oh god, wtf did I just read.

this is.....stranger than some of the stuff I've read.



#6 General Banzai

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 07:30 PM

It's like GhebFE all over again

#7 Star Brom

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 07:56 PM

It's like GhebFE all over again


Just wait until you get to Chapter 8.

#8 Blademaster!

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 08:18 PM

Brom is back?! This day just couldn't have gotten any better!

#9 Aere

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 08:41 PM

Gonna go cry myself to sleep, peace out.

#10 Klokinator

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Posted 17 March 2012 - 08:56 PM

Just so you know Brom, the word "Anyway" is never spelled "Anyways", it's a pet peeve of my grandma's and I adopted it myself xP

I think I'll actually read this sucker from start to finish, for once.

#11 Star Brom

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Posted 18 March 2012 - 09:01 AM

I have finished the first part of Chapter 9. The second part, which deals with Brom's battle with Selena, will be completed later this week.

#12 Klokinator

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Posted 20 March 2012 - 07:46 PM

Took me a while, but I finished chapter 1. I originally was daunted by the huge wall of ellipses, but then after reading the story I know what those are actually about. I have to say, this story is actually fucking HILARIOUS and I regret not reading it sooner. Chapter 2... soon.

#13 Star Brom

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Posted 22 March 2012 - 09:08 PM

Chapter 9: COMPLEAT!

#14 Anouleth

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Posted 05 April 2012 - 07:49 PM

ctrl f "rural juggernaut"

none found

disappoint

#15 Star Brom

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Posted 10 May 2012 - 07:44 PM

chapter teeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennn

#16 NinjaMonkey

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Posted 10 May 2012 - 07:53 PM

I've only read the first part so far, but I have to say it's friggin' hilarious!

#17 Duels at Dawn

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Posted 01 October 2012 - 02:07 AM

This...is a festive masterpiece that must be continued. Not even Nathaniel Hawthorne could weave a web of words so wonderful as the weight of even a single chapter.

I give this 100 Broms out of 1. In the name of his Brombliness, I await Chapter 11!

#18 Star Brom

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Posted 01 November 2012 - 09:01 PM

Not to worry, Bromrade. Your loyalty shall soon be rewarded.

#19 Jonahman10

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Posted 10 November 2012 - 08:18 PM

Bromrade, this project is still in commission?




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