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#21 General Banzai

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Posted 21 March 2012 - 07:45 PM

FE9 doesn't count. Didn't you stop after Ch2 or so?

Ch 9 actually, meaning I got a third of the way through. It's still on NS2 if you wanna look it up.

#22 Othin

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Posted 21 March 2012 - 07:58 PM

Huh. I must have missed that, then.

#23 Klokinator

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Posted 22 March 2012 - 09:27 PM

Okay... chapter 2 is pretty bad. If you have more chapters, I think you should really rethink posting them here as of now. I didn't think this chapter was very funny at all. See, the last chapters had some sex jokes, calling Mareeta/Blonde chick a whore, okay maybe a little too far, but chapter 2 was entirely about sex, really over the top. Not only that, but I don't think we need child rape in the story either.

I hope chapter 3 is more palatable xP

#24 Anouleth

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Posted 24 March 2012 - 06:44 PM

I didn't read through most of the new stuff, but I noticed one thing that made me laugh:
Othin: In Berwick Saga we don't have shit like this. *Twenty page explanation of fog of war in Berwick Saga*

Othin: In conclusion, Berwick Saga.

#25 Black Frost

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Posted 24 March 2012 - 07:07 PM

I learned from this fic if I major in English in college, I get to learn how to write bad sexual fanfiction.

Sounds pretty sweet.

#26 franku

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Posted 24 March 2012 - 08:15 PM

When Shiva says "I'm a Jew."

I finally have a comeback for all of god cheerleaders at union square now.

#27 Captain Britain

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Posted 24 March 2012 - 08:18 PM

God.

I look forward to Manster, argueing with you is like talking to a brick wall, but you're very entertaining.
lol@ sex jokes in almost every line.....

#28 dondon151

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Posted 24 March 2012 - 08:30 PM

is this what english majors learn to do in college

#29 General Banzai

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Posted 24 March 2012 - 08:54 PM

is this what english majors learn to do in college

Yeah

Badfic 101 is a required course

#30 Klokinator

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Posted 24 March 2012 - 11:41 PM

When Shiva says "I'm a Jew."

I finally have a comeback for all of god cheerleaders at union square now.

*I'm Jewish

And yeah I lol'd at that part. This chapter is better than chapter 2, but nowhere near as funny as chapter 1. I are disappoint.

#31 Klokinator

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Posted 29 March 2012 - 01:12 PM

At least the child rapist guy left halfway through. Still, the chapter wasn't that great, man. I know you can do better.

#32 General Banzai

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Posted 29 March 2012 - 02:21 PM

At least the child rapist guy left halfway through. Still, the chapter wasn't that great, man. I know you can do better.

The only chapter you like is my least favorite one. >.>

#33 Agile Tit-Tyrant

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Posted 01 April 2012 - 10:17 PM

Hilarious. I like the character pics too. :3

#34 Klokinator

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Posted 07 April 2012 - 04:45 PM

Chapter four is really funny, a contender against my favorite chapter 1.

#35 Hamlet

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Posted 09 May 2012 - 11:17 AM

My Fair Lady is actually good, you know

#36 Klokinator

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Posted 20 May 2012 - 08:31 PM

he stopped updating. wryyyyyyyy

#37 bottlegnomes

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Posted 20 May 2012 - 10:07 PM

My Fair Lady is actually good, you know


Correction, My Fair Lady is fantastic, just like anything with Audrey Hepburn.

Anyway, only read chapter 1. Like everyone said, it's meh. Also, you contradict yourself. First, Leidrick says it's 1999, then Havan says Othin's the first person to say buster since the 90s.

#38 Captain Britain

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Posted 11 June 2012 - 07:42 AM

Man, I find these funny,

It'd be nice if you could continue these

Edited by Folgore Green, 11 June 2012 - 07:42 AM.


#39 Hamlet

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Posted 14 June 2012 - 05:54 PM

Correction, My Fair Lady is fantastic, just like anything with Audrey Hepburn.


Wrong. My Fair Lady with Audrey Hepburn is nothing compared to My Fair Lady with Julie Andrews. Audrey just looked pretty and didn't even do her own singing. Julie did, and did it extremely well. If she didn't get rejected by Jack Warner she would've been Eliza, like she should have. The good that came out of her rejection was that she did Mary Poppins instead. The rest is history.

#40 Z.M.

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Posted 18 July 2012 - 09:16 PM

Inspired me to continue FE5. Hilarious. :XD: