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[General Banzai]

FE9 doesn't count. Didn't you stop after Ch2 or so?

Ch 9 actually, meaning I got a third of the way through. It's still on NS2 if you wanna look it up.

[Othin]

Huh. I must have missed that, then.

[Klok]

Okay... chapter 2 is pretty bad. If you have more chapters, I think you should really rethink posting them here as of now. I didn't think this chapter was very funny at all. See, the last chapters had some sex jokes, calling Mareeta/Blonde chick a whore, okay maybe a little too far, but chapter 2 was entirely about sex, really over the top. Not only that, but I don't think we need child rape in the story either.

I hope chapter 3 is more palatable xP

[Anouleth]

I didn't read through most of the new stuff, but I noticed one thing that made me laugh:
Othin: In Berwick Saga we don't have shit like this. *Twenty page explanation of fog of war in Berwick Saga*

Othin: In conclusion, Berwick Saga.

[Tyrant Sage]

I learned from this fic if I major in English in college, I get to learn how to write bad sexual fanfiction.

Sounds pretty sweet.

[69']

When Shiva says "I'm a Jew."

I finally have a comeback for all of god cheerleaders at union square now.

[Aquaman]

God.

I look forward to Manster, argueing with you is like talking to a brick wall, but you're very entertaining.
lol@ sex jokes in almost every line.....

[dondon151]

is this what english majors learn to do in college

[General Banzai]

is this what english majors learn to do in college

Yeah

Badfic 101 is a required course

[Klok]

When Shiva says "I'm a Jew."

I finally have a comeback for all of god cheerleaders at union square now.

*I'm Jewish

And yeah I lol'd at that part. This chapter is better than chapter 2, but nowhere near as funny as chapter 1. I are disappoint.

[Klok]

At least the child rapist guy left halfway through. Still, the chapter wasn't that great, man. I know you can do better.

[General Banzai]

At least the child rapist guy left halfway through. Still, the chapter wasn't that great, man. I know you can do better.

The only chapter you like is my least favorite one. >.>

[Agile Tit-Tyrant]

Hilarious. I like the character pics too. :3

[Klok]

Chapter four is really funny, a contender against my favorite chapter 1.

[Hamlet]

My Fair Lady is actually good, you know

[Klok]

he stopped updating. wryyyyyyyy

[bottlegnomes]

My Fair Lady is actually good, you know

Correction, My Fair Lady is fantastic, just like anything with Audrey Hepburn.

Anyway, only read chapter 1. Like everyone said, it's meh. Also, you contradict yourself. First, Leidrick says it's 1999, then Havan says Othin's the first person to say buster since the 90s.

[Aquaman]

Man, I find these funny,

It'd be nice if you could continue these

Edited by Folgore Green, 11 June 2012 - 07:42 AM.

[Hamlet]

Correction, My Fair Lady is fantastic, just like anything with Audrey Hepburn.

Wrong. My Fair Lady with Audrey Hepburn is nothing compared to My Fair Lady with Julie Andrews. Audrey just looked pretty and didn't even do her own singing. Julie did, and did it extremely well. If she didn't get rejected by Jack Warner she would've been Eliza, like she should have. The good that came out of her rejection was that she did Mary Poppins instead. The rest is history.

[Zeem]

Inspired me to continue FE5. Hilarious.