Can Sorakh28 sprite?
Posted 10 April 2012 - 12:42 PM
Posted 11 April 2012 - 02:17 PM
Light Blue: I think the old hair's still popping up a little bit, that, or you accidentally used the Outline here. You can maybe blend the two together, or get rid of the outer hair in general.
Green: Needs more shading where the headband meets the skin. I also caught an extra skin tone popping up near the eyebrow.
Gold: Awkward square-thing of hair there. I know that's from splicing but you can afford to clean that up.
Purple: You don't need that much outline in the hair. Outline the head and then fill the rest with the darkest hair shade.
Overall it looks better, although the angle is bugging me a little. There's some body shading that could be improved but I'll leave it to someone else to critique that.
Posted 11 April 2012 - 03:33 PM
Modification 4. Starting to look good, but it looks like I kinda goofed off with certain places... fixable, thought. Again, critiques are helpful, so go ahead. I'm gonna start working on other sprites as well, so sooner or later I'll post them as well to see what you guys will think about it.
Posted 11 April 2012 - 04:46 PM
Edited by L95, 11 April 2012 - 06:51 PM.
Posted 05 September 2012 - 11:45 AM
I wasn't exactly sure were to AA and how to fix the shading... but I did work on a few things. Namely, changing the color of the necklace so it works with the color palette, among other things.
Edited by SPSEliwoodGabriel, 05 September 2012 - 11:45 AM.
Posted 05 September 2012 - 05:21 PM
You've also overshot the color limit by 5.
14 colors edit.
Edited by · j e a l o u s y ·, 05 September 2012 - 05:22 PM.
Posted 15 September 2012 - 05:18 PM
This is just a few that I had in mind. Tell me which colors you think goes well!
Posted 15 September 2012 - 05:30 PM
The second shade of the arm parts here is way too light. It barely shows up against the first, and makes it look really flat. You also seem to have gotten some blue from the middle onto where the third shade should be for the arms. May want to fix these.
Posted 15 September 2012 - 05:58 PM
Mellie 2.0 with a BETTER pallet! I actually love this one and, yeah, it looks better than the original one! Still has the cheery look I was looking for in my brightly-colored Shaman without making eyes bleed! Again, critiques/suggestions are accepted... visual critiques are very welcome!
...Oh, and a request for you guys! I need three FE7 pallets for three lords- a female sword-wielding lord, a female lance-wielding lord, and a male anima-wielding lord. If you guys have any ideas for them, that would be wonderful, it would help me out in the long run for my next batches of sprites!
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