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[deranger]

ear still seems low because her head is tilted (eyes are not level, so the ear should be affected by that upwards slant). That may just be me though.

[Hamlet]

http://gyazo.com/afb...e4c926af7887f69

Light Blue: I think the old hair's still popping up a little bit, that, or you accidentally used the Outline here. You can maybe blend the two together, or get rid of the outer hair in general.

Green: Needs more shading where the headband meets the skin. I also caught an extra skin tone popping up near the eyebrow.

Gold: Awkward square-thing of hair there. I know that's from splicing but you can afford to clean that up.

Purple: You don't need that much outline in the hair. Outline the head and then fill the rest with the darkest hair shade.

Overall it looks better, although the angle is bugging me a little. There's some body shading that could be improved but I'll leave it to someone else to critique that.

[SPSEliwoodGabriel]

Modification 4. Starting to look good, but it looks like I kinda goofed off with certain places... fixable, thought. Again, critiques are helpful, so go ahead. I'm gonna start working on other sprites as well, so sooner or later I'll post them as well to see what you guys will think about it.

[L95]

The hair that is right against the skin needs some AA. The outline/shading looks really thick in places on her head. There is also a pixel jutting out in her hair.

Edited by L95, 11 April 2012 - 06:51 PM.

[SPSEliwoodGabriel]

And I'm back! ...Sorta.

I wasn't exactly sure were to AA and how to fix the shading... but I did work on a few things. Namely, changing the color of the necklace so it works with the color palette, among other things.

Edited by SPSEliwoodGabriel, 05 September 2012 - 11:45 AM.

[· j e a l o u s y ·]

Mess with the contrast and saturation more. Your colors're ridiculously bright and lacking in contrast.
You've also overshot the color limit by 5.

14 colors edit.

Edited by · j e a l o u s y ·, 05 September 2012 - 05:22 PM.

[SPSEliwoodGabriel]

...I got a little carried away trying to figure out on what colors I wanted on my girl.


This is just a few that I had in mind. Tell me which colors you think goes well!

[Florina Stark]

The middle one seems most pleasing.

[I have opinions]

Middle one is probs the best, the blue works better on the middle of the dressthing and the headband.

Also



The second shade of the arm parts here is way too light. It barely shows up against the first, and makes it look really flat. You also seem to have gotten some blue from the middle onto where the third shade should be for the arms. May want to fix these.

[SPSEliwoodGabriel]

Mellie 2.0 with a BETTER pallet! I actually love this one and, yeah, it looks better than the original one! Still has the cheery look I was looking for in my brightly-colored Shaman without making eyes bleed! Again, critiques/suggestions are accepted... visual critiques are very welcome!

...Oh, and a request for you guys! I need three FE7 pallets for three lords- a female sword-wielding lord, a female lance-wielding lord, and a male anima-wielding lord. If you guys have any ideas for them, that would be wonderful, it would help me out in the long run for my next batches of sprites!