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[Amelia]

2 days~

[Hamlet]

Subieko and Nova's are the two that stood out the most. The others have many problems aplenty. I voted Nova this round because it's more "new" than Subieko's Eliwood genderbend, but it's good, so props to Subieko.

[Klok]

The only ones I'd vote for are Laurence, Yoshi, and DSG. The others all have a lot of flaws.

Laurence, I'd vote him because it stands out more, it's a black guy and the color choices and wacky and interesting.
Yoshi's is the cleanest, minus the tiny quare in the forehead. I still voted him though because it has the most unique face.
DSG's is also pretty clean, and consistent if nothing else. Sorta boring though.

[Yoshi]

The others have many problems aplenty.

Would you mind pointing out the flaws in mine, I dunno what to change otherwise. :V

[Hamlet]

Would you mind pointing out the flaws in mine, I dunno what to change otherwise. :V

The body is my biggest concern. I know you mentioned earlier that the body was lazy. The right arm has a small bit of armor that doesn't show otherwise, and it's got the same proportions as the non armored arm. There's a few tufts of hair that I see that are kind of misplaced and throw the look off overall.

[Freohr Datia]

Laurence, I'd vote him because it stands out more, it's a black guy and the color choices and wacky and interesting.

While the colors are pretty interesting, there's still how the neck seems to be placed on the far side of the body and looks kinda weird that way XD (EDIT: Oh wait I guess the neck wasn't as bad as I thought it was at first, because it's just that the cloak kinda gives the impression that the shoulder stretched out much further... But I also did kinda notice how weird it also looks with the left shoulder, OPV, looks raised much higher than the right one) And it's difficult making a super dark color in the hair look good when the rest of the hair is a much lighter color... And the bottom left scarf thingy is super bland and sort of a random looking placing. With the body facing the way it is it'd be hard making it look good coming out on that side.

So yes the colors are very appealing, but it isn't missing on many flaws like the others you didn't like had.

I haven't really decided who I'd vote just yet...

Edited by Freohr Datia, 15 April 2012 - 10:23 PM.

[DualSilverGunner]

Voted Yoshi; while the body was fairly plain in terms of design, that hair got me from the moment he submitted it.

[Klok]

Yoshi's FC'd hair is even better than his spliced hair.

[Wonderboy]

I'd like to hear what you all believe is wrong with mine exactly, because honestly, I can see flaws on the others you guys are praising, but that's none of my business. Just curious about whats so bad about mine.

[Klok]

The left arm looks really off, maybe needs AA? Not only that, but it's a very simple splice too. Kinda bland, and the color choices don't really complement one another. That's off the top of my head. It's not terrible, just needs more uniqueness or something.

[I have opinions]

The left arm looks really off, maybe needs AA? Not only that, but it's a very simple splice too. Kinda bland, and the color choices don't really complement one another. That's off the top of my head. It's not terrible, just needs more uniqueness or something.

There's also the big ol' hair bump here

and the jagged mess here

:B

[Freohr Datia]

The left arm looks really off, maybe needs AA?

Yeeeeaaaaah this definitely because armor typically never has just two colors XD Not unless it's a dark color at least I think.

And random patches of light color in the bottom right of the hair also looks kinda off, as well.

Heehee second edit Oh oh oh oh! And maybe also there's how there isn't all that much contrast for the first two shades in the hair while the third shade looks super dark! But idk that might look better if you made the second shade a bit darker...

Edited by Freohr Datia, 16 April 2012 - 05:54 AM.

[Thor Odinson]

I'd like to hear what you all believe is wrong with mine exactly, because honestly, I can see flaws on the others you guys are praising, but that's none of my business. Just curious about whats so bad about mine.

Besides the whole AA issue, the body looks extremely narrow due to the proximity of the shoulder armour. Either the shoulder armour should be reshaded to look more like cloth (and even then unless you're going for poncho the body should show up more, they should be moved further apart to show that her body exists, or they should be made smaller then still moved apart if you actually want the tiny nonexistent shoulders most FEGBA women have to deal with. :E


Oh yeah voted Yoshi. Cleanest-looking one by far.

Edited by Luminescent Blade, 16 April 2012 - 05:55 AM.

[fuzz94]

I only got one vote, but I'm happy that I finally got a vote after rounds upon rounds of these

[Amelia]

Closin' down. Yoshi, next set please.