Feedback: FE Oath of Strength
Posted 12 May 2012 - 09:23 PM
Also, you used script format. That was smart. No one can really criticize prose in a script format story.
Edited by Folgore Yellow, 12 May 2012 - 09:23 PM.
Posted 12 May 2012 - 09:33 PM
Posted 12 May 2012 - 09:36 PM
Posted 13 May 2012 - 01:52 AM
Seth, Marcus, Camus and Titania all attended the same military academy.
What was it called? Overpowered Jeigan Academy?
Anyway, this looks promising.
Posted 13 May 2012 - 08:03 AM
Posted 13 May 2012 - 12:26 PM
-Silver lance wielding
Posted 02 October 2012 - 09:09 AM
You've done rather well, I think, in your task of integrating the games. I look forward to chapter one once you post it.
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