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[VincentASM]

Nah, there's no deadlines involved.

I'll take a look at your article and the others later ^^;;;

[VincentASM]

Yes it was. Although I can't really remember if you worked on the (since removed) Ashnard article on Wikipedia, I thought you might be interested in keeping it alive somewhere else ^^

[VincentASM]

You can do either; I check out my e-mail relatively frequently.

Anyway, can't wait to see what you come up with, but there's no hurry of course ^^;;;

[Eltoshen]

I was wondering about the confirmed endings and stuff. Like, for example, Tethy's ending with Gerik and all as shown here.

For FE8, since it's possible for multiple endings, do you think we should consider all options and generalize their feelings? Like perhaps saying that "Tethys has a liking for Gerik" or "Tethys has shown her feelings for Gerik and Ike when she..." without forcing it onto them. An example of forcing it onto them: "Tethys and Gerik are an ITEM"

Edited by Eltoshen, 05 January 2009 - 06:15 PM.

[VincentASM]

Well, you can have multiple endings in FE7 as well, right? Or did you mean there's more possibilites in FE8?

In any case, I, myself, would have mentioned them just as possibilites. For instance "If Gerik and Tethys have an A support..."

However, I guess generalising would also work, but I'm worried about endings where characters get married. You can't exactly say they married both, or multiple characters ^^;;;

[Eltoshen]

Yeah, I just used FE8 as an example. It occurs a lot in FE7, moreso than FE8.

My opinion would be to include all the facts possible but not taking preference for one specific side. If that means omitting the name of the person he settles down with, or saying something like, "Hector seems to be fond of Lyn, Florina, and Farina and eventually ends up marrying one of the three lucky ladies. They would one day become the parents of a beautiful young girl named Lilina."

Edited by Eltoshen, 06 January 2009 - 06:22 PM.

[VincentASM]

Just thought I'd mention it. I won't be as active here, until around the 25th of this month.

In the meantime, I'll try and catch up on the three or so articles that I still need to critique, but after that I'll have to leave the critique to the others.

Since I'm here, I have to say I really appreciate everyone's help with this project. I almost can't keep up with everything that's submitted, but luckily we have a healthy amount of editors/commenters as well. Initially I was kind of doubtful that I'd get anything over 5 articles, but actually we have around 20+ now : o

Edited by VincentASM, 12 January 2009 - 02:50 PM.

[Burning Gravity]

Heh, 20+? Looks like you should update that little comment on the home page that says "12" then.

Just one thing I'd like to point out, in Florina's article, I found the following;

"Huey"

Just use ctrl+f to find it, it might be "he" or "Eliwood" but regardless I didn't get it. :\

That's it, otherwise it looks great.

EDIT: Apparently that's the name of the pegasus, something I completely did not know... it'd be nice if you made a note to thatJust ignore this post...

Edited by Fire Blazer, 15 January 2009 - 10:18 PM.

[Eltoshen]

Heh, 20+? Looks like you should update that little comment on the home page that says "12" then.

Just one thing I'd like to point out, in Florina's article, I found the following;

"Huey"

Just use ctrl+f to find it, it might be "he" or "Eliwood" but regardless I didn't get it. :\

That's it, otherwise it looks great.

Huey is the name of her pegasus.

[VincentASM]

As promised, I'm back. (I think.)

While I was away, I managed to win the lottery snag a copy of Phantom Brave and I'm kind of addicted to it. So...

Anyway, I'll try and catch up with all the articles that still need critiquing. I've currently uploaded three articles, and I'll get around to checking out the others tomorrow or something : )

[VincentASM]

I should have mentioned it earlier, but it seems now's a good time to do so. I'm going to be inactive for an indefinite (but hopefully short) amount of time.

I've been busy with work, playing games and other stuff lately. That and I stupidly managed to get my main PC infected with viruses and etc. >___<

So I won't be able to add new articles and probably won't be able to check the in-progress ones. You can still feel free to submit articles though- I'll just check them when I get back.