This has been fixed in the latest edit with what you pointed out. But feel free to point out some other examples.
Actually, I went back to reading your edited version. Guess what, many of your mistakes are still there, but I am not going to point them out. Take for example: Galving was sat
It should be Galving was sitting You didn't edit that. There are others but I will not go over all of them.
I never said everything you said was wrong. I said that I edited anything I did not respond to... did you read the post?
Yeah, I take it really badly. That's why I edit my work... because I cannot accept that was something wrong with it.
*Shakes head* You just fix what you think deserves to be fixed up, but you still left out many errors unfixed.
I did read it.
And so now I come to the conclusion to say this to you: We both know we aint perfect, we both need help. As to my case with wanting feedback or not, you probably know why I don't want any feedback. I want to avoid trouble like this. As I have said before in my story threads, I know I will make mistakes, but I will find them on my own. I don't need people pointing them out to me, especially when people tend to do it in a bad way. So surely I will find them and correct them, and in the future avoid them, which I have.
Moreover, you have ridiculed my work before, I have ridiculed yours. You have called my work crap, I have called yours something along that line. You have said my work will never get published, I agree, by the looks of it neither will yours. I need help, so do you. In different ways but we do. I call this Shuuda/Löki feedback war over. We are just making fools out of ourselves and I want that to end, despite what you might think.
Improve on what you think needs improving, as will I. Just remember that we all have different views and writing styles. My style will never be like yours and vice versa.
--When I actually post something up, there wont be any feedback, and anyone is free to read it, why would I post it up if I did not want people to read it? What you should know is that many of the crappy stories I wrote was just self inserts, nothing serious to be honest if you ask me. And so now, truly, I bid my adieu. Good luck in the future.