Great job, the Game became so much more playable with this. Of the 2 menu translations right now, I much prefer this one.
Some things I've noticed/Some things that bothered me
Pressing R when all units are gray makes some of the options mess up the box
I know this was done on purpose, but the new unit map palettes don't really seem like an improvement. The villagers have white hair, and now the enemies don't have that stylish purple hair. If/When you do make the original graphics patch, make that the default.
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Stat rings have the normal stat up names (Spirit Dust, Dragonshield, etc.) despite still being rings. This is a very nitpicky complaint, but it still bugs me
I was half scared to press Fight during the first setup because that usually means start the chapter in other games. Looking at the other translations, I think "Pick" and "Deploy" were better choices for choosing your units
In the Menu, the Leadership and Movement Stars are called "Command" and "Action". I think you could clear up some confusion by just calling it Leadership and Movement