Teapot Posted May 25, 2011 Share Posted May 25, 2011 Side of face is flat, and the ear is too close to the eye. Shading along bangs is a bit heavy, or otherwise lacking, in the wrong areas. Why would you want to pillow that bikini? It was shaded adequately before. Flabby, flat arm. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted May 27, 2011 Author Share Posted May 27, 2011 (edited) For SoS Splicin Comp. 8, Lakche weeee. EDIT: Also, I don't know what fixes I made here, since my computer fell and the battery popped out, bleeeh. Edited May 27, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chalis Posted May 29, 2011 Share Posted May 29, 2011 I like her. No idea what's going on where her hair meets the armor on the right but other than that, it is a nice and clean splice. As for this Ursula/Tate thing over here, there are three noticeable problems. Zoom and study. The little + marks are my own minor fixes. There are plenty of different ways to do it, but looking really closely at the similarities from past FE mugs and your own are the best ways to figure out how certain shadings is done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
47948201 Posted May 29, 2011 Share Posted May 29, 2011 I don't quite know what's going on when it meets the armor on the left, either. IIRC Lakche's original sprite has her leaning backwards, and that's why her hair sticks out forward. As is I'd kinda recommend doing something with the back of her hair. It looks pretty boring. Also, the collar on our right side sorta just goes off into nowhere and disappears. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted May 30, 2011 Author Share Posted May 30, 2011 Kind of a SM revamp WIP-y thing. Point out any things that look weird plz? Also fixes weee. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 Proportions look ape like. small, thin legs, giant torso, and arms longer than his legs (though his baggy clothing makes everything look weird.) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 Reshade that part of shoulder. Jagged. Uhm, weird looking eyebrow. Reshade neeeck. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted May 30, 2011 Author Share Posted May 30, 2011 (edited) Derp. EDIT: Edited May 30, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Primefusion Posted May 30, 2011 Share Posted May 30, 2011 The legs on the battle sprite seem kind of floppy because they're coming out at an odd angle. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted June 6, 2011 Author Share Posted June 6, 2011 Doopdoop, splicing comp Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted June 8, 2011 Share Posted June 8, 2011 Pink: The hair shading here is awkward. The way the shading is here doesn't mesh with the rest of the hair properly. Blue: It's awkward how the 4th skin shade is used twice like that. It makes the top of the ear look globby and deformed. Purple: The way this is shaded seems awkward to me. Otherwise it's very good. :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted June 12, 2011 Author Share Posted June 12, 2011 K so, I retried hair shading. Heavily referenced Trent's Refia sprite for this. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Psych Posted June 12, 2011 Share Posted June 12, 2011 That....actually looks really good. Maybe more separation on the bangs and things and more forehead shading though. There seems to be something wonky with his left eyebrow, and the cape could probably be worked on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CT075 Posted June 12, 2011 Share Posted June 12, 2011 Right (OPV) shoulder is a little too far out. Bring it in a pixel or two. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted June 12, 2011 Author Share Posted June 12, 2011 (edited) Doopdoopdoop. Edited June 12, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted June 13, 2011 Share Posted June 13, 2011 I like it. I remember way back when it looked so damn similar to one of my mugs. The hair actually reminds me of my own haircut haha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted June 13, 2011 Author Share Posted June 13, 2011 Fixed some hair issues, like hair shape and such. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted June 16, 2011 Author Share Posted June 16, 2011 (edited) JoshuaxMarisa totally canon Edited June 16, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackShadow Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 JoshuaxMarisa totally canon Those strap things look weird because of the same colour, although that may be me. And lol Dressup!Anna's Daughter. Pretty good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted June 16, 2011 Author Share Posted June 16, 2011 Needed to make him taller to be hack insertable lololol. Made some fixes to the cape. Any suggestions, especially to the bottom left (OPV)? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amelia Posted June 16, 2011 Share Posted June 16, 2011 The cape is a little pillowy, especially the folds. Other than that, the cape is fine. The face, however, isn't. It looks like it's squeezed. o3o Right here: Eyes and eyebrows are really unbalance. While he has a serious-looking (very manly, very angry) right eye, his left eye looks sad and crap like a little girl. I suggest you should take a look at people like Roland and Eliwood and ref the eyes and eyebrows. Eyes are important because their expression lets us know the character's personality, so you should send some time working on those. Trims are rough. And neck is really badly shaded, I dunno if it's just me or the neck/head is too small for the body. I think you should make the neck/head a little bigger or the body smaller. Hair still has pillow shadings. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted June 18, 2011 Author Share Posted June 18, 2011 (edited) This is kind of embarrassing, but what exactly is trim? I tried looking it up but found no results D: Made some changes, hopefully for the better C: Edited June 18, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted June 18, 2011 Share Posted June 18, 2011 (edited) Trim = the shiny stuff along the hem of the clothing; the stuff TRIMMING the edges Basically, it's the catch-all term for shiny border shit. Edited June 18, 2011 by · j e a l o u s y · Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted June 18, 2011 Author Share Posted June 18, 2011 (edited) Thanks AK. I have yet to fix the collar or the shading around the chin. Edited June 18, 2011 by Joerachi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joerachi Posted June 21, 2011 Author Share Posted June 21, 2011 Really, no comments? Fixed (?) collar trim. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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