Agro Posted October 25, 2012 Share Posted October 25, 2012 His face looks a little too round, I think. He has... babyface? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jubby Posted October 25, 2012 Share Posted October 25, 2012 He looks pretty pudgy, yeah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Princess Peachar Posted October 25, 2012 Share Posted October 25, 2012 I'm not a huge fan on the body positioning. He is either A) has a longer far shoulder than a near shoulder or B) retracting his head in disgust like so. His corget collar is even, yet his clothe collar isn't? They are also at a different facing angle than each other. Also needs a little more square on the jaw. Just a little. Not too much. But enough to rid him of babyface. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astelaine Posted October 26, 2012 Share Posted October 26, 2012 (edited) Also needs a little more square on the jaw. Just a little. Not too much. But enough to rid him of babyface. Agreed. Just a bit. But seriously, the face is 100% better now! GLORY Edited October 26, 2012 by Astelaine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted February 27, 2013 Author Share Posted February 27, 2013 Started out as a test to see if my spriting muscle was still there, and a contribution to that Divinitas game. But I've since changed it into something else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deranger Posted February 28, 2013 Share Posted February 28, 2013 Something Hector-esque about him (maybe it's just the hair). Good stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caliban of Sycorax Posted February 28, 2013 Share Posted February 28, 2013 Ear could stand to be increased in size by one pixel, but I do like it. The head angle is pretty cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astelaine Posted March 2, 2013 Share Posted March 2, 2013 (edited) Ooooh, I like this guy. His collar is uneven, though - I would raise the left collar (opv) by 1 px and lower the right one by 1 px. The lightest shade in his armor trim (the yellow) could also stand to be brighter, for better contrast. Finally, the two thick strands of hair to the upper-right of his ear need smoothed out, both in their curve and their anti-aliasing. Other than that, lovely. I adore his face! Good job, Nayr. Edit: Ohh, his scar should curve with the shape of his face too. Looks kind of off to me atm. Edited March 2, 2013 by Astelaine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted March 3, 2013 Share Posted March 3, 2013 (edited) Started out as a test to see if my spriting muscle was still there From Wikipedia.org: In humans, prolonged periods of immobilization, as in the cases of bed rest or astronauts flying in space, are known to result in muscle weakening and atrophy. [spoiler=legit crit]Let's see here... I think the trim on his chestplate is off angle. The pauldrons alone look mismatched in that respect, too. This is emphasized by the big bits of trim at the top. This bit should be more towards the center. The little curvy parts seem to both have the exact same angle at a glance, even though they shouldn't. Basically his angles are just everywhere and a little bit confused, in my opinion. Also, the trim on his collar makes it look like separate pieces of armor rather than one whole thing. You use the border color a little bit too much where the darkest shade of armor/trim would be fine. Is that a scar, or a really wispy cowlick? Oh, and there's way too much Hector. Methinks someone of your talent could do a little better than this. Edited March 3, 2013 by Agro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted March 4, 2013 Share Posted March 4, 2013 It's like your afraid to use the darkest shade on that armor It's fackin armor USE that darkest shade nayr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted March 10, 2013 Author Share Posted March 10, 2013 Oh, and there's way too much Hector. Methinks someone of your talent could do a little better than this. Believe it or not, the only part from Hector that I used in that face was the far-faceline. Rest of it was heavily edited off of a splice of Harken and Klein with a custom nose, mouth, and eyebrows. It coming out looking so Hector-like was an accident actually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted April 22, 2013 Author Share Posted April 22, 2013 So I spruced up my splice contest entry to look more custom. Plenty of things that would have been illegal by contest rules needed to be done. Also tweaked the colors. Switched to a green kimono. The guys on Marky's board said it'd make a pretty good Myrmidon, even though that wasn't at all what I was going for. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted April 23, 2013 Share Posted April 23, 2013 her head seems kind of small in comparison to the body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted April 23, 2013 Author Share Posted April 23, 2013 Maybe it's just that the FE heads are too fat? :/ Anime styles have heads that are like globes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted April 23, 2013 Share Posted April 23, 2013 Ah, now I know who made the tiny head chick. Yep, your head is the right size, everyone else is just wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted April 23, 2013 Author Share Posted April 23, 2013 Ah, now I know who made the tiny head chick. Yep, your head is the right size, everyone else is just wrong. Says the guy who slaps a swastika on every one of his OCs. :p Uploaded with ImageShack.us Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deleted35362 Posted April 23, 2013 Share Posted April 23, 2013 Watch some tv or surf the internet you'll find that the sizes of people's heads in relation to their bodies will vary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Joker Posted April 23, 2013 Share Posted April 23, 2013 (edited) nice. now it looks better. :) edit: aren't the edits to this allowable in the contest? Edited April 23, 2013 by Acha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted April 23, 2013 Author Share Posted April 23, 2013 No, because I've had to literally redraw several parts of the hair and edit the body wayyy too much. Breaks the mass customing rule. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted April 23, 2013 Share Posted April 23, 2013 Says the guy who slaps a swastika on every one of his OCs. :p You must have me confused with someone else, I don't sprite. And even if I did, the four characters you're talking about still have the correct proportions and good shading so, this is supposed to be bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fuzz94 Posted April 23, 2013 Share Posted April 23, 2013 Uh, now her head seems a little out of place. Like it should be shifted over a pixel or 2 to the right OPV Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted May 20, 2013 Author Share Posted May 20, 2013 (edited) Been doing edits to my NuSue sprite. And I think I finally worked out all the manishness from it. Also added some blue to her tribal pattern(saw a fanart with it and liked it) with the spare color I had on the palette and it has a nice little pop because of it. Edited May 20, 2013 by Nayr Farros Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AthenaWyrm Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 (edited) she has a long face and her body is really scrunched her eyes are very dark her mouth is too small the near side of her face doesn't have hair covering it her cheek is too low is my opinion on it Edited May 21, 2013 by AthenaWyrm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nayr Farros Posted May 21, 2013 Author Share Posted May 21, 2013 1. I measured the face to Sue's existing portrait. It's the same. 2. I could probably let the body out a couple of pixels. But then people would start saying the head is too small. 3. I'll look into that. Can't promise I can fix it because Sue's eyes use the same colors as her hair, which is dark green. 4. The hairstyle is the same as the original. It's just that the original's looked like she used way too much hairspray. and it spiked out. 5. Agree to disagree on that. 6. Thanks for the feedback(too many people try to pass snark off as cnc. I like concise lists) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Gabriel Knight Posted May 21, 2013 Share Posted May 21, 2013 SHouldn't her clothes be a little more red? And I don't understand why her cleavage has to be showing when the original did not... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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