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[url="http://serenesforest.net/forums/index.php?showtopic=31185"]Story[/url]

Here is where one may discuss the great work of genius that is Fire Bromblem, and where I may post updates on the progress of the story.

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If this story was made into a movie, it would probably be rated R. I do not plan on toning it down, and if you're a wee kiddie, I highly recommend you stay away though you shall remain an unenlightened sod.

So far, I have already completed about 10 chapters, and the should all be posted sometime tonight.

Also, I always spell mee with two e's and omit an 'a' from agin. 'Tis just an eccentricity of mine.

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[quote name='Star Brom' date='17 March 2012 - 05:28 PM' timestamp='1332030514' post='1896502']
If this story was made into a movie, it would probably be rated R. I do not plan on toning it down, and if you're a wee kiddie, I highly recommend you stay away though you shall remain an unenlightened sod.
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Oh fudge... you're here too now.

At least VincentASM is here to prevent this place from turning into FEChan as well.

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I must say that I really enjoy how INNOVATIVE your story is.

Bravo~

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[img]http://i1130.photobucket.com/albums/m532/ModCharles/BromDanved66.png[/img]

'Twas a good, festive year indeed.

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Oh god, wtf did I just read.

this is.....stranger than some of the stuff I've read.

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[quote name='General Banzai' date='17 March 2012 - 08:30 PM' timestamp='1332034207' post='1896600']
It's like GhebFE all over again
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Just wait until you get to Chapter 8.

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Gonna go cry myself to sleep, peace out.

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Just so you know Brom, the word "Anyway" is never spelled "Anyways", it's a pet peeve of my grandma's and I adopted it myself xP

I think I'll actually read this sucker from start to finish, for once.

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I have finished the first part of Chapter 9. The second part, which deals with Brom's battle with Selena, will be completed later this week.

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Took me a while, but I finished chapter 1. I originally was daunted by the huge wall of ellipses, but then after reading the story I know what those are actually about. I have to say, this story is actually fucking HILARIOUS and I regret not reading it sooner. Chapter 2... soon.

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[url="http://serenesforest.net/forums/index.php?showtopic=31185&st=0#entry1897108"]Chapter 9: COMPLEAT![/url]

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[url="http://serenesforest.net/forums/index.php?showtopic=31185&view=findpost&p=1975481"]chapter teeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeennn[/url]

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I've only read the first part so far, but I have to say it's friggin' hilarious!

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This...is a festive masterpiece that must be continued. Not even Nathaniel Hawthorne could weave a web of words so wonderful as the weight of even a single chapter.

I give this 100 Broms out of 1. In the name of his Brombliness, I await Chapter 11!

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