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When Shiva says "I'm a Jew."

I finally have a comeback for all of god cheerleaders at union square now.

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God.

I look forward to Manster, argueing with you is like talking to a brick wall, but you're very entertaining.

lol@ sex jokes in almost every line.....

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When Shiva says "I'm a Jew."

I finally have a comeback for all of god cheerleaders at union square now.

*I'm Jewish

And yeah I lol'd at that part. This chapter is better than chapter 2, but nowhere near as funny as chapter 1. I are disappoint.

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At least the child rapist guy left halfway through. Still, the chapter wasn't that great, man. I know you can do better.

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At least the child rapist guy left halfway through. Still, the chapter wasn't that great, man. I know you can do better.

The only chapter you like is my least favorite one. >.>

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My Fair Lady is actually good, you know

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My Fair Lady is actually good, you know

Correction, My Fair Lady is fantastic, just like anything with Audrey Hepburn.

Anyway, only read chapter 1. Like everyone said, it's meh. Also, you contradict yourself. First, Leidrick says it's 1999, then Havan says Othin's the first person to say buster since the 90s.

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Man, I find these funny,

It'd be nice if you could continue these

Edited by Folgore Green

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Correction, My Fair Lady is fantastic, just like anything with Audrey Hepburn.

Wrong. My Fair Lady with Audrey Hepburn is nothing compared to My Fair Lady with Julie Andrews. Audrey just looked pretty and didn't even do her own singing. Julie did, and did it extremely well. If she didn't get rejected by Jack Warner she would've been Eliza, like she should have. The good that came out of her rejection was that she did Mary Poppins instead. The rest is history.

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hilarious i agree losing the guy august was good fin appears promising i would like to see more

Edited by Cyron

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This...........is............the best story I've read on SF.

I look forward to jokes about Fred, Alva, Kein and the other "generic", "average-ish" units.

And Olwen vs Eyrios.

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This is fun. Reminds me of the days where I wrote parodies like this. I definitely want to see more of this!

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this is hilarious and flawless

it always warms my heart when people post things like this out of the blue

just for that i'll post the next chapter

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