Matt Snow Posted November 12, 2012 Share Posted November 12, 2012 The position of his legs and arms seem kinda off to me, in the animated part it looks like he moves his right foot back but he moves his right hand up so it looks kinda weird IMO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted February 8, 2013 Author Share Posted February 8, 2013 So.... reference (pretty much a copy so ehh) Going to swap the colors but not sure if everything's going in the right direction? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agro Posted February 8, 2013 Share Posted February 8, 2013 The wing-things look really contracted... You've already violated the hackbox, I don't see why you shouldn't violate it further Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted February 11, 2013 Author Share Posted February 11, 2013 (edited) fluffed 'em up~ (was trying to stay in 100x100, but that was just a random constraint) Edited February 11, 2013 by Lenh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Laufeyson Posted February 12, 2013 Share Posted February 12, 2013 fluffed 'em up~ (was trying to stay in 100x100, but that was just a random constraint) Ok, i literally gasped when i saw this. Amazeballs. Now do Melia!! The headwing mid portion on our right looks a little less detailed than it should but i dunno. It seems to me that the face plate portion of the helmet could use a teeny bit more shading? Either way, you are my hero for spriting that! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teapot Posted February 12, 2013 Share Posted February 12, 2013 You've 12 colors (and a stray pixel up on top). I think you could spare yourself a few more colors and blend things out more. It's too stark in the grey and white parts, and the seafoam needs more contrast. The wings are also pretty lazy, IMO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted February 13, 2013 Author Share Posted February 13, 2013 I feel crazy responding without having putting out a finished chunk of work, but Thanks guys~ I'll take a shot at putting those rec's into the palette and improving the wings this weekend. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted February 14, 2013 Share Posted February 14, 2013 I was absolutely going to add both of your sheets into FEXP, but then problems. You don't have dodge frames for the griffin, and you don't have critical frames for either of them. If the griffin could raise its head and open it's mouth like some kind of war cray, I could use that as a solid critical, just leave the SFX to me. If the sniper guy could do something simple, like a fist pump or whatever, I could use that as well. I did fashion a sort of dodge for the griffin by playing around with it's frames but some sort of legit dodge would be appreciated too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted February 14, 2013 Author Share Posted February 14, 2013 (Now you suggest the lack of) For the sniper it sounds cool to have emptying a magazine into the air and reload to critical shot. Gryphon sounds easy enough to add on the two extensions as well. Got an idea for one assassin's animation, but not the other yet. When there's enough sketch-work to get the ideas across I'll make a spammy thread over at your place. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klokinator Posted February 14, 2013 Share Posted February 14, 2013 That sounds awesome! I look forward to it. Also, with all these animations involving guns that I've added recently, I'm definitely adding a guns weapon type to FEXP. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted February 19, 2013 Author Share Posted February 19, 2013 (Sweet, now to subtly influence laguz getting in there) Gave a 2nd shot to the High Entia Guard (not so sure about the sweater still): Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
risingSolaris Posted February 20, 2013 Share Posted February 20, 2013 Looks good! I feel like the green could still use a lot of contrast, though. The collar also seems a bit weird, as the right (OPV) part of it is a lot higher. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted July 20, 2013 Author Share Posted July 20, 2013 Must...break ice again.... -> slightly altered schnauz ...woof! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kramy Posted July 20, 2013 Share Posted July 20, 2013 funny how Merc also posted a dog warrior XD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted July 20, 2013 Share Posted July 20, 2013 DOGGYYYYY Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mew Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 GENGEN~~~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alabaster Posted July 21, 2013 Share Posted July 21, 2013 Captain gengen ♥♥♥♥♥ I'm so gonna do my collie knight too, once i fix my gpu issues <333 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted July 29, 2013 Author Share Posted July 29, 2013 Ha, thanks guys ^^; Done with puppies/dogs for now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted July 30, 2013 Share Posted July 30, 2013 auhauhauhauhauhahahahghghghhgghghghghghghhghghghghghghghghghhgghhg you did !!!!!!! :#33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 its beautiful! I lofe it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord of Gabriel Knight Posted July 30, 2013 Share Posted July 30, 2013 SOOOOOOOOOOO CUUUUUUUUUUTE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted December 16, 2013 Author Share Posted December 16, 2013 (edited) Doing an update on this guy (Nikolai). whoops lost his chubs Any crits appreciated. ^^; [Edit: doneish, barring really bad bad flubs ] Edited December 16, 2013 by Lenh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mercenary Lord Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 wheres his chubs Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Book of Ereshkigal Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 (edited) Is it just me or is his neck really long? I think you just need to move the shoulders up instead of shortening the neck, though. I'm honestly not sure, I tend to make necks too short lol Edited December 28, 2013 by L95 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ghast Posted December 28, 2013 Share Posted December 28, 2013 i got same vibes about the neck, but i was too afraid to say anything.. lol Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lenh Posted December 28, 2013 Author Share Posted December 28, 2013 Is it just me or is his neck really long? I think you just need to move the shoulders up instead of shortening the neck, though. I'm honestly not sure, I tend to make necks too short lol Could be, I'll try to fix it. Got no idea about form anyways so it's probably true. ^^; Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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