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Hey there everybody, I'm new here and I'm hoping that I'm doing this right...

Anywayz! Right to the point! I like doing fan dubs and fan covers of songs, but, I can't actually speak/read in Japanese so I usually need a basis for my words. In this particular case, I want to sing "Fly" from "A Wind Colored Tsubasa". (As well as others but I'll cross that bridge when I get there). So I was wondering if anybody could translate the words to the full-length song to English? I only have what they have in game in the cutscene so far, which is;

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

When I was just a kid, I'd stare up at the sky

And wish that one day I could feel that free

I never thought one day, that I'd be flying like this

My wings spread wide and all the world around me

With you in my life, your wind beneath my wings

Suddenly I am ten times as strong!

I'm on a rainbow stage! The sun is my spotlight!

And it's shining so bright for my song!

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue

I can do anything when I'm with you

I may not have the words

I've never been good with that stuff

But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you, for all that you've done

That, I believe, is only about a quarter of the lyrics. So would anybody be willing to try to translate it?

And are there any songs you'd like to see full lyrics/videos for?

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Hey there everybody, I'm new here and I'm hoping that I'm doing this right...

Anywayz! Right to the point! I like doing fan dubs and fan covers of songs, but, I can't actually speak/read in Japanese so I usually need a basis for my words. In this particular case, I want to sing "Fly" from "A Wind Colored Tsubasa". (As well as others but I'll cross that bridge when I get there). So I was wondering if anybody could translate the words to the full-length song to English? I only have what they have in game in the cutscene so far, which is;

"Lyrics"

That, I believe, is only about a quarter of the lyrics. So would anybody be willing to try to translate it?

And are there any songs you'd like to see full lyrics/videos for?

I did some research and I found a channel that posted the english lyrics of two TMS#FE Songs, those being "Feel" (the short version) and "Black Rain" (the full version). (https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCkjfKrJKDQF13h3LddQ4MRw)

Apparently, according to his video descriptions, the official artbook has the official translations of these songs in them. I'm assuming the translation of "Fly" could be in said artbook as well?

If that is indeed the case, you could ask someone with access to this artbook for the official translation. I wasn't able to find a scan of such a page myself.

Keep in mind that the information I provided consists of some speculation on my part, plus I'm hardly an authority figure on Shin Megami Tensei or Tokyo Mirage Sessions. Nevertheless I wish you the best of Luck. ;):

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. . .did someone say artbook?

The songs I see lyrics for are Reincarnation, Feel, Black Rain, Dream Catcher, and Beastie Game. The CD comes with some cards with the lyrics in romaji (which makes it harder to translate), and the only "new" one is Dia Sweet Witch.

Fly/whatever the hell Mamori sings/Labyrinth/Give Me/some other stuff aren't on there. A pity, because I really like Labyrinth and Give Me.

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. . .did someone say artbook?

The songs I see lyrics for are Reincarnation, Feel, Black Rain, Dream Catcher, and Beastie Game. The CD comes with some cards with the lyrics in romaji (which makes it harder to translate), and the only "new" one is Dia Sweet Witch.

Fly/whatever the hell Mamori sings/Labyrinth/Give Me/some other stuff aren't on there. A pity, because I really like Labyrinth and Give Me.

Thanks for the heads up! Too bad the requested song isn't in there...

At the very least I learned something new today... Did you know that the "Squid Sisters" song from "Splatoon" got a a tribute in this game? I love this kind of easter eggs in games :P:

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Glad to see I'm not the only one who want's to covers happen! Though between the two of us your probably the one with the means to produce the music. T.T

I can't really help you on Fly: Your my Wind, but Reincarnation, Feel, and Black Rain are all on the TMS #FE wiki page right here on Serenes. I've been writing with them as guide lines for a little while with ease.

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I've got the CD (Vocal Collection with Kanji lyrics) and I could make a photo of the lyrics and post them here.

With a bit time, I could even translate them but I'm currently bussy.

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I've got the CD (Vocal Collection with Kanji lyrics) and I could make a photo of the lyrics and post them here.

With a bit time, I could even translate them but I'm currently bussy.

If you can get a VERY CLEAR photo of the kanji lyrics, that would help.

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Glad to see I'm not the only one who want's to covers happen! Though between the two of us your probably the one with the means to produce the music. T.T

I can't really help you on Fly: Your my Wind, but Reincarnation, Feel, and Black Rain are all on the TMS #FE wiki page right here on Serenes. I've been writing with them as guide lines for a little while with ease.

Well, I'm a singer. :) .... I need lyrics in order to sing though. When I can eventually do it I plan on posting a link somewhere so people can hear. Like my signature or something.

The other song I want to sing is Labyrinth, but, I mostly just want to see that used in a fan-made anime-ending credit sequence. XD

As for Reincarnation, Feel, and Black Rain, I'm not sure. I feel like I won't do Reincarnation or Feel Justice, and I don't really have the voice for Black Rain.... I want to though! .....Maybe while I wait on Fly....

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Well, I'm a singer. :) .... I need lyrics in order to sing though. When I can eventually do it I plan on posting a link somewhere so people can hear. Like my signature or something.

The other song I want to sing is Labyrinth, but, I mostly just want to see that used in a fan-made anime-ending credit sequence. XD

As for Reincarnation, Feel, and Black Rain, I'm not sure. I feel like I won't do Reincarnation or Feel Justice, and I don't really have the voice for Black Rain.... I want to though! .....Maybe while I wait on Fly....

Oh I'm a decent singer myself (if I may be so bold, I sang Lost In Thoughts All Alone at a contest without an accompaniment), all I'm missing is a microphone, the accompaniment music, video production software... yeah between gaming and saving up to make my brother's birthday as nice as it can be, it's not happening any time soon.

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Oh I'm a decent singer myself (if I may be so bold, I sang Lost In Thoughts All Alone at a contest without an accompaniment), all I'm missing is a microphone, the accompaniment music, video production software... yeah between gaming and saving up to make my brother's birthday as nice as it can be, it's not happening any time soon.

I sang Lost in Thoughts All Alone at a solo and ensemble concert with my friend last year after rearranging it for a duet. It was pretty fun. :)

As for accompaniment music, try downloading Audacity, you can off-vocal songs with it and it's free. :)

I don't actually own a nice microphone or camera either, but, I do have editing software and the computer lab at my school has them so I'm fine until I get money. :)

By the way....

If you can get a VERY CLEAR photo of the kanji lyrics, that would help.

空高くFly 君が強く この背中を押してる

ありったけの気持ちを伝えよう

本当に 本当に ありがとう

広い空に憧れてた 幼かったあの頃は

翼広げて羽ばたける今日を 想像もできなかった

君という風と逢い 私、強くなれた

虹色のステージ 太陽のスポットライト

とても輝いていて

空高くFly 君がいれば 夢も夢じゃなくなる

ありきたりな 言葉でも正直な

この気持ち この気持ち 受け止めて

空高くFly 君が強く この背中を押してる

ありったけの気持ちを伝えよう

本当に 本当に ありがとう

長い様で短い様な 不思議な時間を重ねて

宝物は目に見えるものが 全てじゃないと知ったよ

目を閉じて深呼吸 君の声がしてる

涙なんて乾くくらい

とても 温かくて

空高くFly 君がくれた 数えきれない奇跡は

褪せることない これからも永遠に

この胸に この胸に 抱きしめて

空高くFly 君がフワリ この心を撫でてく

明日もまた 笑顔になる魔法

本当に 本当に ありがとう

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう

Blowin' in the wind 君と一緒に

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう

ずっと一緒に

道に迷っても 暗い夜でも

私、ひとりじゃないから

君と一緒に

春の花を 夏の雲を 秋や冬の星座を

忘れられない 景色をこれからも

探そうよ 探そうよ

Blowin' in the wind

空高くFly 君がいれば 夢も夢じゃなくなる

ありきたりな 言葉でも正直な

この気持ち この気持ち 受け止めて

空高くFly 君が強く この背中を押してる

ありったけの 気持ちを伝えよう

本当に 本当に ありがとう

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう

Blowin' in the wind 君と一緒に

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう

ずっと一緒にBlowin' in the wind

Does that help?

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That's perfect! Dunno if I can chew through all of this today, but I'll give it a shot. My translation skills are kinda shaky, so if anyone who knows better wants to chime in, go ahead~!

EDIT: HERE WE GO!

Part one involves inserting the translated lyrics into the full Japanese lyrics. 'cause I'm lazy.

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

When I was just a kid, I'd stare up at the sky

And wish that one day I could feel that free

I never thought one day, that I'd be flying like this

My wings spread wide and all the world around me

With you in my life, your wind beneath my wings

Suddenly I am ten times as strong!

I'm on a rainbow stage! The sun is my spotlight!

And it's shining so bright for my song!

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue

I can do anything when I'm with you

I may not have the words

I've never been good with that stuff

But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

長い様で短い様な 不思議な時間を重ねて

宝物は目に見えるものが 全てじゃないと知ったよ

目を閉じて深呼吸 君の声がしてる

涙なんて乾くくらい

とても 温かくて

空高くFly 君がくれた 数えきれない奇跡は

褪せることない これからも永遠に

この胸に この胸に 抱きしめて

空高くFly 君がフワリ この心を撫でてく

明日もまた 笑顔になる魔法

本当に 本当に ありがとう

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう

Blowin' in the wind 君と一緒に

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう

ずっと一緒に

道に迷っても 暗い夜でも

私、ひとりじゃないから

君と一緒に

春の花を 夏の雲を 秋や冬の星座を

忘れられない 景色をこれからも

探そうよ 探そうよ

Blowin' in the wind

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue

I can do anything when I'm with you

I may not have the words

I've never been good with that stuff

But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう

Blowin' in the wind 君と一緒に

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう

ずっと一緒にBlowin' in the wind

That cuts my work in half.

EDIT 2: I have no idea how to translate this cleanly:

長い様で短い様な

so that part's gonna be really rough.

EDIT 3: Here's a really rough draft, in various parts.

[spoiler=Translations side by side]

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue
I know I'm only here because of you
The feelings in my heart
I'll show them to you one by one
So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

When I was just a kid, I'd stare up at the sky
And wish that one day I could feel that free
I never thought one day, that I'd be flying like this
My wings spread wide and all the world around me

With you in my life, your wind beneath my wings
Suddenly I am ten times as strong!
I'm on a rainbow stage! The sun is my spotlight!
And it's shining so bright for my song!

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue
I can do anything when I'm with you
I may not have the words
I've never been good with that stuff
But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue
I know I'm only here because of you
The feelings in my heart
I'll show them to you one by one
So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

長い様で短い様な 不思議な時間を重ねて		Long or short, this marvelous time repeats
宝物は目に見えるものが 全てじゃないと知ったよ	I know that not everything I see is treasure
目を閉じて深呼吸 君の声がしてる			I close my eyes and take a deep breath, I know your voice
涙なんて乾くくらい				My tears have dried up
とても 温かくて				By your incredible warmth
空高くFly 君がくれた 数えきれない奇跡は		I'm flying through the sky, you gave me countless miracles
褪せることない これからも永遠に			They'll never fade, from here to eternity
この胸に この胸に 抱きしめて			I'll hold them close to me, close to me in a hug
空高くFly 君がフワリ この心を撫でてく		I'm flying through the sky, you softly stroked my heart
明日もまた 笑顔になる魔法			Tomorrow will also come again, the magic that brings smiles
本当に 本当に ありがとう			I'm thanking you, thanking you for all you've done
Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう	Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world
Blowin' in the wind 君と一緒に		Blowin' in the wind you and I together
Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう	Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world
ずっと一緒に				Together forever
道に迷っても 暗い夜でも			Though the road is lost, and the night is dark
私、ひとりじゃないから				I'm not alone
君と一緒に					I'm together with you
春の花を 夏の雲を 秋や冬の星座を		Spring's flowers, summer's clouds, autumn and winter's stars
忘れられない 景色をこれからも			The unforgettable view from here
探そうよ 探そうよ				Let's search for it, let's search for it
Blowin' in the wind			Blowing in the wind

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue
I can do anything when I'm with you
I may not have the words
I've never been good with that stuff
But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue
I know I'm only here because of you
The feelings in my heart
I'll show them to you one by one
So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう	Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world
Blowin' in the wind 君と一緒に		Blowin' in the wind you and I together
Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう	Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world
ずっと一緒にBlowin' in the wind		Together forever, blowin' in the wind

Rough draft of an attempted translation:

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

When I was just a kid, I'd stare up at the sky

And wish that one day I could feel that free

I never thought one day, that I'd be flying like this

My wings spread wide and all the world around me

With you in my life, your wind beneath my wings

Suddenly I am ten times as strong!

I'm on a rainbow stage! The sun is my spotlight!

And it's shining so bright for my song!

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue

I can do anything when I'm with you

I may not have the words

I've never been good with that stuff

But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

Long or short, this marvelous time repeats

I know that not everything I see is treasure

I close my eyes and take a deep breath, I know your voice

My tears have dried up

By your incredible warmth

I'm flying through the sky, you gave me countless miracles

They'll never fade, from here to eternity

I'll hold them close to me, close to me in a hug

I'm flying through the sky, you softly stroked my heart

Tomorrow will also come again, the magic that brings smiles

I'm thanking you, thanking you for all you've done

Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world

Blowin' in the wind you and I together

Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world

Together forever

Though the road is lost, and the night is dark

I'm not alone

I'm together with you

Spring's flowers, summer's clouds, autumn and winter's stars

The unforgettable view from here

Let's search, let's search

Blowing in the wind

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue

I can do anything when I'm with you

I may not have the words

I've never been good with that stuff

But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world

Blowin' in the wind you and I together

Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world

Together forever, blowin' in the wind

What I really want is a proofreader/someone who can do a better job of translating this. The stuff I'm relatively confident in is the "Blowin' in the wind" lines, while everything else has varying degrees of apprehension.

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That's perfect! Dunno if I can chew through all of this today, but I'll give it a shot. My translation skills are kinda shaky, so if anyone who knows better wants to chime in, go ahead~!

EDIT: HERE WE GO!

Part one involves inserting the translated lyrics into the full Japanese lyrics. 'cause I'm lazy.

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

When I was just a kid, I'd stare up at the sky

And wish that one day I could feel that free

I never thought one day, that I'd be flying like this

My wings spread wide and all the world around me

With you in my life, your wind beneath my wings

Suddenly I am ten times as strong!

I'm on a rainbow stage! The sun is my spotlight!

And it's shining so bright for my song!

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue

I can do anything when I'm with you

I may not have the words

I've never been good with that stuff

But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

長い様で短い様な 不思議な時間を重ねて

宝物は目に見えるものが 全てじゃないと知ったよ

目を閉じて深呼吸 君の声がしてる

涙なんて乾くくらい

とても 温かくて

空高くFly 君がくれた 数えきれない奇跡は

褪せることない これからも永遠に

この胸に この胸に 抱きしめて

空高くFly 君がフワリ この心を撫でてく

明日もまた 笑顔になる魔法

本当に 本当に ありがとう

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう

Blowin' in the wind 君と一緒に

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう

ずっと一緒に

道に迷っても 暗い夜でも

私、ひとりじゃないから

君と一緒に

春の花を 夏の雲を 秋や冬の星座を

忘れられない 景色をこれからも

探そうよ 探そうよ

Blowin' in the wind

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue

I can do anything when I'm with you

I may not have the words

I've never been good with that stuff

But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう

Blowin' in the wind 君と一緒に

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう

ずっと一緒にBlowin' in the wind

That cuts my work in half.

EDIT 2: I have no idea how to translate this cleanly:

so that part's gonna be really rough.

EDIT 3: Here's a really rough draft, in various parts.

[spoiler=Translations side by side]

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue
I know I'm only here because of you
The feelings in my heart
I'll show them to you one by one
So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

When I was just a kid, I'd stare up at the sky
And wish that one day I could feel that free
I never thought one day, that I'd be flying like this
My wings spread wide and all the world around me

With you in my life, your wind beneath my wings
Suddenly I am ten times as strong!
I'm on a rainbow stage! The sun is my spotlight!
And it's shining so bright for my song!

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue
I can do anything when I'm with you
I may not have the words
I've never been good with that stuff
But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue
I know I'm only here because of you
The feelings in my heart
I'll show them to you one by one
So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

長い様で短い様な 不思議な時間を重ねて		Long or short, this marvelous time repeats
宝物は目に見えるものが 全てじゃないと知ったよ	I know that not everything I see is treasure
目を閉じて深呼吸 君の声がしてる			I close my eyes and take a deep breath, I know your voice
涙なんて乾くくらい				My tears have dried up
とても 温かくて				By your incredible warmth
空高くFly 君がくれた 数えきれない奇跡は		I'm flying through the sky, you gave me countless miracles
褪せることない これからも永遠に			They'll never fade, from here to eternity
この胸に この胸に 抱きしめて			I'll hold them close to me, close to me in a hug
空高くFly 君がフワリ この心を撫でてく		I'm flying through the sky, you softly stroked my heart
明日もまた 笑顔になる魔法			Tomorrow will also come again, the magic that brings smiles
本当に 本当に ありがとう			I'm thanking you, thanking you for all you've done
Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう	Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world
Blowin' in the wind 君と一緒に		Blowin' in the wind you and I together
Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう	Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world
ずっと一緒に				Together forever
道に迷っても 暗い夜でも			Though the road is lost, and the night is dark
私、ひとりじゃないから				I'm not alone
君と一緒に					I'm together with you
春の花を 夏の雲を 秋や冬の星座を		Spring's flowers, summer's clouds, autumn and winter's stars
忘れられない 景色をこれからも			The unforgettable view from here
探そうよ 探そうよ				Let's search for it, let's search for it
Blowin' in the wind			Blowing in the wind

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue
I can do anything when I'm with you
I may not have the words
I've never been good with that stuff
But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue
I know I'm only here because of you
The feelings in my heart
I'll show them to you one by one
So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう	Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world
Blowin' in the wind 君と一緒に		Blowin' in the wind you and I together
Blowin' in the wind 次の世界へ行こう	Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world
ずっと一緒にBlowin' in the wind		Together forever, blowin' in the wind

Rough draft of an attempted translation:

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

When I was just a kid, I'd stare up at the sky

And wish that one day I could feel that free

I never thought one day, that I'd be flying like this

My wings spread wide and all the world around me

With you in my life, your wind beneath my wings

Suddenly I am ten times as strong!

I'm on a rainbow stage! The sun is my spotlight!

And it's shining so bright for my song!

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue

I can do anything when I'm with you

I may not have the words

I've never been good with that stuff

But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

Long or short, this marvelous time repeats

I know that not everything I see is treasure

I close my eyes and take a deep breath, I know your voice

My tears have dried up

By your incredible warmth

I'm flying through the sky, you gave me countless miracles

They'll never fade, from here to eternity

I'll hold them close to me, close to me in a hug

I'm flying through the sky, you softly stroked my heart

Tomorrow will also come again, the magic that brings smiles

I'm thanking you, thanking you for all you've done

Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world

Blowin' in the wind you and I together

Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world

Together forever

Though the road is lost, and the night is dark

I'm not alone

I'm together with you

Spring's flowers, summer's clouds, autumn and winter's stars

The unforgettable view from here

Let's search, let's search

Blowing in the wind

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the blue

I can do anything when I'm with you

I may not have the words

I've never been good with that stuff

But I've got my love, you've got my love, I hope that's enough

I'm flying through the sky, I'm soaring through the Blue

I know I'm only here because of you

The feelings in my heart

I'll show them to you one by one

So I'm thanking you, I'm thanking you for all that you've done

Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world

Blowin' in the wind you and I together

Blowin' in the wind let's go to the next world

Together forever, blowin' in the wind

What I really want is a proofreader/someone who can do a better job of translating this. The stuff I'm relatively confident in is the "Blowin' in the wind" lines, while everything else has varying degrees of apprehension.

Well, it's better than nothing at all. I think that this should be good enough to sing, honestly. :)

.....Well, unless somebody else comes and says that it's wrong. But from the looks of it you're the only one who has really attempted to translate it sooooooo.

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Well, it's better than nothing at all. I think that this should be good enough to sing, honestly. :)

.....Well, unless somebody else comes and says that it's wrong. But from the looks of it you're the only one who has really attempted to translate it sooooooo.

I'd reword some of those things to make it flow better. Right now, it's a mess.

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