a burger made with hair Posted March 15, 2017 Share Posted March 15, 2017 (edited) I made a dragon girl and a portrait, how is it? The sprite is completely original, whereas the portrait was slightly copied from a character. Edited February 20, 2022 by a burger made with hair Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zelkami Posted March 15, 2017 Share Posted March 15, 2017 I'm not really qualified to critique the battlesprite, but if you want better criticism you should upload your sprites unresized, so we can get a more accurate look at what the sprite shows as. Just eyeballing the mugshot right now, but from what I can see it has a couple issues. Her scars or tattoos, or whatever they are, are shaded way too harshly. Take a look at characters like Brendan or Uther to get a good idea of how they should be done. Use the light skin tones, and only use the darker tones sparingly. The hair that drapes over her shirt looks like an amorphous blob. There's also no shading separating it from her collar. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a burger made with hair Posted March 15, 2017 Author Share Posted March 15, 2017 Oh, thanks for the feedback. its my first time posting sprites here, so thanks! 5 hours ago, Zelkami said: The hair that drapes over her shirt looks like an amorphous blob. Im not super good with hair and stuff, as you can see. I'll try to fix it up and stuff with your advice tho Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a burger made with hair Posted March 15, 2017 Author Share Posted March 15, 2017 Is this any better? I decided to change the hair to go on her back instead. I also made a mugsheet, so yeah... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zelkami Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 Yeah that's much better. I also like how you fixed her shirt collar, it looks much more natural. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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