Autonima Posted July 26, 2017 Share Posted July 26, 2017 Here it is... It uses Gilliams body, Tirado's head, I could not find the name of the hair for the life of me, but it was part of the fe8 mug spritesheet, Garcia's hair color, and the red from Amelia's armor. He's a knight dude. Please critique this! (I'm going away on he 26th, so that's why I won't be able to post) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zelkami Posted July 26, 2017 Share Posted July 26, 2017 Very good for a first time. Nice and clean, and you've made good changes to the source items. A couple things I would fix though. Red isn't a bad color for this guy, but Amelia's color makes him look like a silly strawberry. Might just be me though. His collar could also probably be shaded a bit better. Looks very flat currently. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kratos Aurion Posted July 26, 2017 Share Posted July 26, 2017 Very nice first mug! Good proportions and all. You should definetly stat mixing up more pieces together. I would have to agree with Zelkami though on the color comment Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autonima Posted July 26, 2017 Author Share Posted July 26, 2017 21 minutes ago, Zelkami said: Amelia's color makes him look like a silly strawberry. Might just be me though. His collar could also probably be shaded a bit better. Looks very flat currently. You're right. Duessel's red looks much better on this guy. I also think I fixed the collar? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlazeKing Posted July 27, 2017 Share Posted July 27, 2017 Not much I can really add but -The head seems a bit too forward, making the back of the head seem a bit too big, try moving the head back a smidge Overall, it's a pretty decent splice, you could try mixing and matching smaller pieces to make it more distinct from it's base pieces since for this mug the base pieces still seem recognizable Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CloudKnight Posted July 27, 2017 Share Posted July 27, 2017 It overall looks good, the only thing that seems odd to me is the face. -Perhaps the eyes and nose are too forward. Maybe backing them up a bit and making a few adjustments. -Or perhaps you should try adjusting his mouth to curve a but upward. The eyes/nose and mouth don't align well I feel. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autonima Posted August 28, 2017 Author Share Posted August 28, 2017 (edited) A slightly more complex mug? No way! It's Mr. Brigand! Characters Used: Parts: Orsin, Saleh, Bone, Binks, Male Villager Colors: Innes, The Novala Recolor Any critique/constructive criticism appreciated! (Also, you can critique my profile picture: a simple splice of Lute, Franz, and Ewan) Edited August 28, 2017 by TheMightyJacobo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 It's better to post sprites without zooming in. It's still pretty simple, but it's good that you're bringing in more parts! The pieces are put together pretty well, though the integration between the hair and head is a kinda week. The positioning is good, but the hairline needs some shading with the skintones to get it blend in properly with the head. The shoulder pad looks a little slapped on since it goes over the cape without any real shading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autonima Posted August 29, 2017 Author Share Posted August 29, 2017 (edited) Put the scarf over the shoulder pad, I think it looks better, I also tried to fix the hairline, it might have worked. Edited August 29, 2017 by TheMightyJacobo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KKAfterbrun Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 The shading on the shirt needs a bit of work. Mostly where the scarf covers it but something about the shoulder pad bugs me. That tan part that's just being covered by the scarf does look as if it needs to be there. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZaManSwings Posted August 29, 2017 Share Posted August 29, 2017 Lovin' it :) only issue so far is that his face almost seems too big for his head. Know what i'm sayin'? there's also a very odd piece of hair(?) in the center of his forehead! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autonima Posted August 29, 2017 Author Share Posted August 29, 2017 Fixed shading on the shirt and head, I don't quite know what you mean about the face being to big Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autonima Posted September 18, 2017 Author Share Posted September 18, 2017 Oops, forgot this thread existed for a bit there. This would be the lord of my hypothetical FE hack, Rhiye. Lord actually isn't the best term, since he's actually just a castle guard. But when the evil empire of (I don't have a name) takes over, he is forced to a assemble a rebellion and take back his country. My first work with battle sprites(It's not very good, I know). There's also something off with the mug, I just don't know what. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autonima Posted October 1, 2017 Author Share Posted October 1, 2017 (edited) Completely redone because the old version was absolute crap. Used Ford, Kyle, Ephraim, Valter, Cormag, and Gilliam. I redesigned him because he looked awful, and I made some changes to the story of my "Hack". He's actually the captain of the castle guard and a knight of Ecilia(I also came up with place names), so that's why he has more lavish armor. Edited October 1, 2017 by TheMightyJacobo Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Capibarainspace Posted October 2, 2017 Share Posted October 2, 2017 (edited) 1 hour ago, TheMightyJacobo said: Completely redone because the old version was absolute crap. Used Ford, Kyle, Ephraim, Valter, Cormag, and Gilliam. I redesigned him because he looked awful, and I made some changes to the story of my "Hack". He's actually the captain of the castle guard and a knight of Ecilia(I also came up with place names), so that's why he has more lavish armor. The original was not that bad but this one is much better spliced. Although I feel the first one was more unique, I particularly liked the colour palette. A couple of things I noticed, The left side of his hair (Ephraim´s) is too outwards, it needs to be pushed a couple of pixels to our left because it looks like he has a very large back skull. Also the the hair locks above his ear look custom. There needs to be more shading on his neck skin below the shoulder pad and I would use just a little bit more of the 4th skin shade to shade between skin and hair. Just to up the uniqueness factor maybe you can find other nose, mouth or eyes so it´s not all Forde´s. Also perhaps add a shirt below the armour so it´s not just black (Admittedly this is a tad more difficult but you can do it!) This is not a problem per se, but I feel the wide body plus the head tilting downwards gives a hunched back look. (notice that valter has his head tilting back and up so he feels more upright.) This is just nitpicking though, it´s not that important. All in all, it´s a big improvement from your other mugs! Edited October 2, 2017 by Capibarainspace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autonima Posted October 2, 2017 Author Share Posted October 2, 2017 1 hour ago, Capibarainspace said: The left side of his hair (Ephraim´s) is too outwards, it needs to be pushed a couple of pixels to our left because it looks like he has a very large back skull. Also the the hair locks above his ear look custom. There needs to be more shading on his neck skin below the shoulder pad and I would use just a little bit more of the 4th skin shade to shade between skin and hair. Just to up the uniqueness factor maybe you can find other nose, mouth or eyes so it´s not all Forde´s. Also perhaps add a shirt below the armour so it´s not just black I think I fixed the head, I added a shirt and Artur's nose. I was also trying to incorporate the silver/purple armor trim from the original, but I couldn't keep it under 16 colors. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Posted October 4, 2017 Share Posted October 4, 2017 The head is a little strangely positioned on the body, it feels too far up and maybe a little too far to our left. The jaw is a little strange, especially around where it meets the collar, you might want to resplice that in. The two pieces of hair are blended together pretty well, and you did an ok job covering up Valter's paint on the armor, though the curve of the shading could be a little smoother. The battle sprite is pretty cool, but feels a little skinny. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autonima Posted November 5, 2017 Author Share Posted November 5, 2017 Something I did for the BBS. It's the Spear Fighter from Fates. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yoshthethird Posted November 5, 2017 Share Posted November 5, 2017 1 hour ago, TheMightyJacobo said: Something I did for the BBS. It's the Spear Fighter from Fates. The pose looks decent, but it's also missing an outline on the hat, and the cloth on the back. I also think it could use more shading, as well as a reworked palette. I'd say make the yellow brighter with more depth, and I don't think you need all those shades of black. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autonima Posted December 2, 2017 Author Share Posted December 2, 2017 Golgotha of the Hills inspired me with his Fates royals battle sprites, so... This happened. Animation coming maybe... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autonima Posted January 3, 2018 Author Share Posted January 3, 2018 Fancy boi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KKAfterbrun Posted January 4, 2018 Share Posted January 4, 2018 Looks good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autonima Posted January 21, 2018 Author Share Posted January 21, 2018 Not exactly FE style, but here's a mug of Mr. Video himself: It'sa Mario! Spoiler Reference Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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